Unification

An awakened night draws near its end
the moon and stars now fade
A dawning hue will soon ascend
love’s conscious serenade

A united mast from land to sea
its morning sail unfurled
Wind and wave do now decree
arrival in this world

Our noonday sun will shine so bold
while the scent of dusk arrives
The night returns to tend its fold
our setting sun archives

Thus, is life in this new world
with darkness and the light
A unity of love is whirled
when day unites with night

5/22/22
Unity Consciousness Poetry Contest
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Date: 5/26/2022 11:59:00 AM
Your "Unification" is a wonderful write. Love your line, "A unity of love is whirled when day unites with night." So very true. Have a blessed day..............
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Mark Koplin
Date: 5/28/2022 5:50:00 AM
Thank you my friend! Have a great weekend!!
Date: 5/25/2022 7:18:00 AM
Great job of unifying through your poetry, Mark. It takes openness to unify, well done my friend. Bill
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Mark Koplin
Date: 5/27/2022 12:53:00 PM
Thank you sir!
Date: 5/23/2022 1:13:00 PM
i love the merge of night and day. Beautifully expressed.
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Mark Koplin
Date: 5/27/2022 12:53:00 PM
Thanks Andrea!
Date: 5/22/2022 10:46:00 AM
The changeover at dawn when night meets the day ,the wonders of his creation. Good luck in the contest Mark. Tom
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Mark Koplin
Date: 5/22/2022 11:18:00 AM
Thanks Tom, it’s always a pleasure my friend!
Date: 5/22/2022 10:12:00 AM
Wow, Mark! This is such a marvelous introspective poem filled with sharp images. It took me through a day from beginning to end. Loved it!
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Mark Koplin
Date: 5/22/2022 11:18:00 AM
What a wonderful thing to say, thank you so very much!
Date: 5/22/2022 9:26:00 AM
You've created a natural harmony between the transformation of night and day. Nicely written, Mark.
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Mark Koplin
Date: 5/22/2022 11:17:00 AM
Thanks bud!
Date: 5/22/2022 9:02:00 AM
Oh Mark that is worded so beautifully…..just lovely! Debx
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Mark Koplin
Date: 5/22/2022 11:17:00 AM
Thanks Deb!
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