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Unicorn

. Soft flame flutters gently before surrendering to darkness A wealth of golden glow Your mind has been captured by dreams, pirates of the imagination Controlling your activity One circle of gray light fades through the arch windows You become spotlight bright And I study your eyes as they dash Through never-ever real land Are you racing, trying to catch the runaway unicorn? Steady, boy, this is your fantasy; let the legend come to you Garnish him with a crimson saddle And canter across hills of sweet poppies Your yellow-brick road need not bear lions Unless you wish to be their king A color-splashed vision Enhanced by your chestnut mane And so you roll, and our waterbed rolls wave-like with you Lions and unicorns dwell not within the sea So they vanish Creating a tiny subconscious wrinkle of memory Your fingers tighten, clinging to your raft Tossed by the tides and waves But Pan flutes from the banks’ hanging cliff The turbulence subsides; you float smoothly o’er open sea So you mellow your mood and follow your eyes Up, up, it glares but does not burn For the sun cannot hurt dreamer’s eyes Unless you let it Stare as it slowly sinks to a spectral sunset That becomes a rainbow because you see it that way And your raft is now a craft, thirty feet, steel-plated Sprouting rings of purple smoke and wings of green feathers Your chariot, my lean and softly-lit friend, Chases the sun across the sky to find your pot of gold When the soft flame flutters gently Before surrendering to darkness

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/10/2012 6:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win! Jon
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Date: 3/9/2012 5:10:00 PM
Congrats on your 1st place win with this imaginative poem, Carolyn.! I enjoyed reading it. Love, Kim
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Date: 3/7/2012 5:45:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go lady..Sara
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Date: 3/7/2012 7:34:00 AM
congrats on the super win and placement....~sashi
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Date: 3/7/2012 7:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "2nd Place Poems Only" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/7/2012 12:51:00 AM
Carolyn congrats on your great win..David
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Date: 3/6/2012 5:45:00 PM
Something unexpected and charming from you Carolyn! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 3/6/2012 5:24:00 PM
Congrats to you Carolyn my poet friend. I think you write so well dear Luv n hugs Michael
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Date: 3/6/2012 4:16:00 PM
congrats Carolyn on a fantastic first place win for this elegant piece of poetic art .. amazing imagery as story unfolds .. well deserved top notch top spot luv..
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Date: 3/6/2012 4:09:00 PM
A magical tale in rhyme, Carolyn...This is so imaginative which u know I absolutely love!..Congrats to you for being the top poet of the day!...Congrats!...I am tickled that you enjoyed the Super Tuesday poem..it has more tweaking to do...I don't think it flows perfectly yet..I had a blast writing it!...Hugs, Gwendolen
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Date: 3/5/2012 9:06:00 PM
congrats Carolyn on a stellar write and win for fantastic free verse contest.. delightful read..luv..
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Date: 3/5/2012 12:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your super win Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/4/2012 10:23:00 PM
A drop in the ocean of comments: Congratulations on the second place win in my contest! This poem is inspirational for me, and I don't think I'm taking its meaning correctly, but I especially like the line "...trying to catch the runaway unicorn?" It makes me think of mankind's chasing unrealistic goals instead of enjoying life. I don't know =). I enjoyed it very much anyway!
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Date: 12/12/2011 9:00:00 PM
words do carry me onward, dream state sometimes memory, hoping there will be some light, pain free and merrily....
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Date: 12/9/2011 10:21:00 AM
Congratulations again with your marvelous unicorn creation, Carolyn.
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Date: 12/9/2011 7:57:00 AM
Your dreams are so real with amazing images... congrats my dear Carolyn... love and hugs Michael
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Date: 12/9/2011 5:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your great win in Tracie's "Dream" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/9/2011 12:44:00 AM
Simply lovely Carolyn Congrats on your 9th place win in my dreams contest xx
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Date: 12/8/2011 10:29:00 PM
Wonderful write Carolyn. Wish I could remember this much about my dreams. Congratulations
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Date: 7/6/2010 8:39:00 PM
ONe of the very best ones, CArolyn. So fantastical! Congratulations. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/6/2010 1:06:00 PM
Hey Carolyn,Congrats on your well deserved win in Tirzah Conway’s contest, you are such a wonderful talent here. Keep up the great work as I wish you many more win in other contests. Please keep your passionate pen flowing. Great you! Love Adeleke
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Date: 7/6/2010 4:52:00 AM
Congratulations Carolyn on your win in Tirzah Conway's contest "Fantasy". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/5/2010 3:12:00 PM
A beautiful poem about Unicorns! Congrat's on your 9th place win in my contest!~Tirzah~
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Date: 6/30/2010 8:44:00 AM
As always, you sail with a contest, and write beautiful poetry!! This too should see the winner's circle!!! Lovely poem! (my daughter had a room filled with her love of unicorns). ps...thanks so much for the "sheep" contest placement of my silly limrick! fun contest indeed! :) Love, Carrie
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Date: 6/30/2010 8:17:00 AM
I'm sure this one will stand out in the contest. Love, Joyce
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