Unicorn

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          Soft flame flutters gently before surrendering to darkness
                                   A wealth of golden glow
   Your mind has been captured by dreams, pirates of the imagination
                                   Controlling your activity

           One circle of gray light fades through the arch windows
                                You become spotlight bright
                          And I study your eyes as they dash
                             Through never-ever real land

            Are you racing, trying to catch the runaway unicorn?
      Steady, boy, this is your fantasy; let the legend come to you
                         Garnish him with a crimson saddle
                    And canter across hills of sweet poppies

                   Your yellow-brick road need not bear lions
                        Unless you wish to be their king
                             A color-splashed vision
                     Enhanced by your chestnut mane

       And so you roll, and our waterbed rolls wave-like with you
               Lions and unicorns dwell not within the sea
                                   So they vanish
              Creating a tiny subconscious wrinkle of memory

                   Your fingers tighten, clinging to your raft
                         Tossed by the tides and waves
                  But Pan flutes from the banks’ hanging cliff
       The turbulence subsides; you float smoothly o’er open sea

                So you mellow your mood and follow your eyes
                      Up, up, it glares but does not burn
                   For the sun cannot hurt dreamer’s eyes
                                  Unless you let it

                   Stare as it slowly sinks to a spectral sunset
             That becomes a rainbow because you see it that way
             And your raft is now a craft, thirty feet, steel-plated
       Sprouting rings of purple smoke and wings of green feathers

                   Your chariot, my lean and softly-lit friend,
          Chases the sun across the sky to find your pot of gold
                    When the soft flame flutters gently
                      Before surrendering to darkness
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Arno Avatar
March 10, 2012 at 6:15 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win! Jon
Merryman Avatar
March 9, 2012 at 5:10 PM
Congrats on your 1st place win with this imaginative poem, Carolyn.! I enjoyed reading it. Love, Kim
Kendrick Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 5:45 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go lady..Sara
Prabhu Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 7:34 AM
congrats on the super win and placement....~sashi
Brown Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 7:04 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "2nd Place Poems Only" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 12:51 AM
Carolyn congrats on your great win..David
Guzzi Avatar
March 6, 2012 at 5:45 PM
Something unexpected and charming from you Carolyn! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
Falotico Avatar
March 6, 2012 at 5:24 PM
Congrats to you Carolyn my poet friend. I think you write so well dear Luv n hugs Michael
Sweetheart Avatar
March 6, 2012 at 4:16 PM
congrats Carolyn on a fantastic first place win for this elegant piece of poetic art .. amazing imagery as story unfolds .. well deserved top notch top spot luv..
Song Avatar
March 6, 2012 at 4:09 PM
A magical tale in rhyme, Carolyn...This is so imaginative which u know I absolutely love!..Congrats to you for being the top poet of the day!...Congrats!...I am tickled that you enjoyed the Super Tuesday poem..it has more tweaking to do...I don't think it flows perfectly yet..I had a blast writing it!...Hugs, Gwendolen
Sweetheart Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 9:06 PM
congrats Carolyn on a stellar write and win for fantastic free verse contest.. delightful read..luv..
Brown Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 12:47 PM
Congratulations on your super win Carolyn. Love, Carol
Magee-Dittberner Avatar
March 4, 2012 at 10:23 PM
A drop in the ocean of comments: Congratulations on the second place win in my contest! This poem is inspirational for me, and I don't think I'm taking its meaning correctly, but I especially like the line "...trying to catch the runaway unicorn?" It makes me think of mankind's chasing unrealistic goals instead of enjoying life. I don't know =). I enjoyed it very much anyway!
Johnson Avatar
December 12, 2011 at 9:00 PM
words do carry me onward, dream state sometimes memory, hoping there will be some light, pain free and merrily....
Dietrich Avatar
December 9, 2011 at 10:21 AM
Congratulations again with your marvelous unicorn creation, Carolyn.
Falotico Avatar
December 9, 2011 at 7:57 AM
Your dreams are so real with amazing images... congrats my dear Carolyn... love and hugs Michael
Brown Avatar
December 9, 2011 at 5:59 AM
Congratulations on your great win in Tracie's "Dream" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
Edwards Avatar
December 9, 2011 at 12:44 AM
Simply lovely Carolyn Congrats on your 9th place win in my dreams contest xx
Quigley Avatar
December 8, 2011 at 10:29 PM
Wonderful write Carolyn. Wish I could remember this much about my dreams. Congratulations
Dietrich Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 8:39 PM
ONe of the very best ones, CArolyn. So fantastical! Congratulations. LUv, Andrea
Adeite Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 1:06 PM
Hey Carolyn,Congrats on your well deserved win in Tirzah Conway’s contest, you are such a wonderful talent here. Keep up the great work as I wish you many more win in other contests. Please keep your passionate pen flowing. Great you! Love Adeleke
Brown Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 4:52 AM
Congratulations Carolyn on your win in Tirzah Conway's contest "Fantasy". Love, Carol
Conway Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 3:12 PM
A beautiful poem about Unicorns! Congrat's on your 9th place win in my contest!~Tirzah~
Richards Avatar
June 30, 2010 at 8:44 AM
As always, you sail with a contest, and write beautiful poetry!! This too should see the winner's circle!!! Lovely poem! (my daughter had a room filled with her love of unicorns). ps...thanks so much for the "sheep" contest placement of my silly limrick! fun contest indeed! :) Love, Carrie
Johnson Avatar
June 30, 2010 at 8:17 AM
I'm sure this one will stand out in the contest. Love, Joyce
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