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Unholy Thunderous Domination

Destroy thine own brother in abject apathy
taking up arms 'midst conquering expectancy,
invoking howls of contemptible thunder 
neath skies' transparency beyond trepidation,
battles' plundering captures naught of stability 
nor intervention from otherworldly gods
predisposed towards earthly universal unity, 
persecuting soil's divinity neath aggregate exploits
incalculable hunger upon grounds' domination,
tears were purged in the name of unholy ascendancy
deliver us from susceptible evil men chanting war cries,
congregated in humanity's blood spoils on fire
hailing flared atomic detonations' nuclear nightmare
Trumped midst castle's undeniably delusional rhetoric

Ultimately ascertained, entities' faith shall resoundingly be diminished
 casting down divine dispensation bestowed pon the wrath of mankind

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Phil Capitano

Date: 12/19/2016 9:08:00 AM

Sounds like Revelations, apocalyptic and I like it a lot Paloma. The problem is an "us versus them mentality" and the false belief there is not enough to go around...some men are greedy.

White Wolf

Date: 11/22/2016 2:54:00 AM

Great write, Paloma. Excellent!

Paloma P
Date: 11/22/2016 1:04:00 PM

Thanks much Rick! /|\

Darren White

Date: 11/21/2016 12:58:00 PM

Joining you in this unholy prayer... Adding it to my favourites...

Paloma P
Date: 11/22/2016 1:03:00 PM

Double thanks Darren!

Jannie Breedt

Date: 11/21/2016 7:15:00 AM

Trumped? Nuclear mushroomed clouds. Oh no no no.this earth shatterer of poetry . May it do for you what none has done. I am trembling here

Paloma P
Date: 11/22/2016 1:02:00 PM

How dare they?! :) Thanks so much Jannie.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 11/19/2016 1:03:00 PM

My PTSD from growing up in the cold war had been going away until most recently. It would be good to have leaders and followers who have empathy for the oppressed, the poor and the ignorant who can take over and create a very dangerous situation. When I hear them talk about the USA first, I think to myself, but we all breath the same air and live on the same planet. Greed is not good.

Paloma P
Date: 11/22/2016 1:01:00 PM

That doesn't sound good, thanks for your thoughts Duke.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/19/2016 12:37:00 PM

Very powerful poem, Paloma. Very deep w/serious subject matter to contemplate. Your wisdom is much appreciated and duly noted. This poem packs a megaton punch. I'm blown away. Great write that is going in my fave for sure. Love always to you.

Paloma P
Date: 11/22/2016 1:01:00 PM

Sometimes I get furious, and it spews out my ink. :) Thanks Freddie.