Unharnessed

A school teacher named Miss Shaw Though well-endowed wore no bra. Things slipped and jiggled Bounced and wiggled Pupils are still awed by what they saw.

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SKAT A

Date: 2/14/2015 1:00:00 AM

Paul, great limerick............ not that I like the imagery. I'd be embarrassed. enjoyed. :)Have yourself a sweet valentine's Day. ~SKAT LOVE~

Paul Schneiter
Date: 2/14/2015 3:58:00 PM

Thank you, SKAT A. I respect your opinion about the imagery. In fact, I respect your opinion about anything having to do with poetry. I hope you're having a lovely Valentine's Day.

KP Nunez

Date: 2/13/2015 9:10:00 PM

LOL! Loved the rhyme...worth more than just a dime...must have made some students stand up in their prime...Giggles from the land of thousand isles...:D Kim

Paul Schneiter
Date: 2/14/2015 4:02:00 PM

Kim, ...which wouldn't have been a crime. Thank you, Kim, I'm grateful for your kind, thoughtful words. You're a sweetheart for stopping by.

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 2/12/2015 5:19:00 PM

G'day Paul... And boy oh boy, Miss Shaw would have encouraged the boys to bring their mobile phones to class and test the photographic capabilities I guess. Thanks for the chuckle Paul - Lindsay

Paul Schneiter
Date: 2/13/2015 8:14:00 PM

Thank you, Lindsay, for stopping by and making a perceptive observation. Boys will be boys, huh?

JAN ALLISON

Date: 2/12/2015 12:29:00 PM

ha ha ha - love it - guess she made a bit of a boob by going braless :-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx

Paul Schneiter
Date: 2/14/2015 11:12:00 PM

Jan, I meant to add (re. "Disappointment") that some men think too much of themselves.

Paul Schneiter
Date: 2/13/2015 8:28:00 PM

Thanks, Jan, for keeping me abreast of her apparent penchant for overexposure. BTW, I'm still laughing about "Disappointment." THAT is a classic.