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unhabited heart

Ever daunting,more eccentric is what is left of me There is no goodness left in me to see. The roads have become patchy Quite rough and vague Because there is no good left for any risks to take. No happiness,no wonders, no zeal along There is only tenpramental aloofness which is meant to be wrong The place has become cold There is no heart for any feelings to hold The place once blossomed with dalias and dashes But there is no love left at which one gazes No signs for existence No signs for any persistence. You can't follow your dreams here Because there is nothing left but ghostly screams of fear The place is unhabited,a never opened gift Which once was meant for the love to lift. No memories,no softness is left around, There is this boundless sky and a beligerant ground.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Date: 4/2/2015 7:13:00 PM
Aanika, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Love LINDA
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Date: 3/20/2015 6:06:00 PM
Aanika, Congratulations on your awesome win........ Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/21/2015 5:49:00 AM
Thanks Linda! I'm new here so can u tell me what reward or anything I get for winning
Date: 3/1/2015 3:25:00 PM
You wrote that reply to yourself?
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Aanika Aery
Date: 3/9/2015 1:03:00 PM
I was jst pstng it on sm1 else n it came to mine...I don't know how.
Date: 2/21/2015 11:50:00 PM
U should send this to a publisher!
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