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Unfulfilled Romance

Wondering if she will give me the chance To share my primal love with her alone Adds to fostering feelings of romance That have infested my form to the bone But had she not played it so hard to get And given of herself to me too soon I think that I would then live to regret Not laboriously working the swoon It is an unfulfilled romance that beats The lustful, swollen heart within my chest And too easy a prey the game defeats Preventing carnal love known at its best So play the game my beautiful dove The wait continues in boosting my love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/7/2010 10:13:00 AM
its cute. really cute.
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Date: 8/2/2010 10:59:00 AM
Congratulations to you on your win Joe in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "The English or Shakespearean Sonnet". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/2/2010 1:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved WIN, Joe. Great sonnet. Thank you for sharing. Lainie
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Date: 8/1/2010 5:47:00 PM
Very interesting one about how unfulfilled romance keeps it alive. I agree!! Luv, Andrea OH, and a big congratulations.
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Date: 7/31/2010 2:49:00 PM
Very wise of her. Congratulations Joe. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/31/2010 11:24:00 AM
Congratulations Joe, on another fine win. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/31/2010 7:05:00 AM
Congrats Joe on your winning poem in Dr. Ram's contest with this magnificent piece for an entry .. written so beautifully ... enjoy another big well deserved win my friend.. with luv..
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Date: 7/31/2010 5:54:00 AM
Joe, you have quite unusual approach when you write. I am much impressed the way you have handled the theme of the sonnet, partivcularly the couplet that sums up the theme. Congrats on the 6th place win
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Date: 7/21/2010 6:59:00 PM
how lovely is this, great job Joe
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