Unfortunately

you are a very fast car headed for a brick wall
and i want to ride
you are a beautiful hell-bent guilty
feeling i have inside
you are a fistful of strange pills in my pocket
that i finger constantly
you are a bottle full of dark red wine
i want to drink compulsively

you i could never save
but i'm done playing superman
i never knew how to fly, anyway
i only ran
i'd like to see
what messes we could get into
and watch how we get out of them
i'd like to stick around for just a little while
then run away again

you are the badly written poem
that's been hidden deep for years
you are the bad friend i could never count on
yet you held me and wiped my tears
you are the ominous storm clouds
slowly blocking out the sun
you are the horrible wreck
i just can't turn my head away from

i see the worst of me in you
and the worst of you in me
we mirror each other tragically
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Date: 7/2/2020 5:56:00 PM
Hello Robin Sexton, I do not see anything wrong with this poem. You did very well. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Date: 6/9/2020 4:33:00 AM
i see the worst of me in you /and the worst of you in me /we mirror each other tragically// wonderfully expressed; like this piece very much; thank for this poem sharing
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Date: 6/2/2020 5:41:00 PM
I'm glad I stumbled upon this as it is hauntingly captivating and very well written. This is one to add as a favorite. Very impressive.
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