Unforgettable Moment

Those were my green and salad days, 
a time of innocence and play, where
marbles shone like pearls and 
every trinket was a treasure. 
The world was simple, a canvas of pure joy
school, home, and the familiar corners of my aunt's house 
were the boundaries of my kingdom.
I was a prince, carefree and unburdened, 
unaware of the complexities that lay beyond.

My father, the silent architect of my happiness, 
waged wars against invisible foes, 
his struggles hidden behind a veil of stoicism. 
I floated through those days, 
buoyed by blissful ignorance, 
until a stark awakening came. 
It was etched into my memory, 
a moment as indelible as an inscription on copper
the day he sold his wedding watch to pay for my education.

For the first time, 
I felt the sting of tears for another's sacrifice. 
It was a profound shift, 
a departure from the self-centred orbit of childhood. 
Emotions painted the moment in vivid hues, 
a portrait of empathy and maturity 
emerging from the canvas of my youth.



For a poetry contest, inspired by a memory.
©15/09/2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A  Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 4:40 PM
Enjoyed Malik. Hope you had a wonderful Memorial Day filled with pride and togetherness. love ~SKAT!~
A   Avatar
April 2, 2015 at 8:03 PM
Malik, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Love LINDA
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 11:36 PM
What a memory...!:) indeed parents will do anything for their children..:)
Yaseen Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 3:39 AM
many many thanks dear friend, you are so kind... God bless you dear Friend Always,,, Malik
Ferguson Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 4:55 AM
nice job thanks for sharing it with me
Yaseen Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 5:02 AM
Thanks for your visit
A   Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 4:57 PM
nice win...PD
Yaseen Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 11:26 PM
thanks for your visit,,, Malik
Allison Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 5:11 PM
wonderful heartfelt write so full of memories and emotions:-) Hugs jan xxx
Yaseen Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 11:19 PM
Many many thanks Jan, you are really a great poet with a kind heart.. your comments are always welcome. God bless
Yvonne Avatar
September 21, 2014 at 8:10 AM
Congratulations on your well earned win about this deep and touching memory.
Yaseen Avatar
September 21, 2014 at 11:34 PM
many many thanks for your visit and the comments
Widjanarko Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 12:54 AM
Congrats on your win, indeed this is a treasure memory and also profound, I got the feel :) thank you for visiting my page before, have a nice day, hug, yanny
Yaseen Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 1:02 AM
thanks yanny for your visit.
Dietrich Avatar
September 19, 2014 at 9:49 PM
Congrats on your win. Yours was one of my favorites of the memories.
Yaseen Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 12:21 AM
Thanks Andrea, I always like your poems..... Stay blessed Dear.. Malik
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 19, 2014 at 5:08 PM
Very emotional memory. I am sure there were many other days like this kept secret from you. Beautiful sacrifice of your parents. Congratulations on your win
Yaseen Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 12:20 AM
Thanks Brenda for stopping by and a nice comment, yeah definitely there are always many other that we never come to know,I think each one among us has same memories... Thanks again God Bless,,,,, Malik
Lindley Avatar
September 19, 2014 at 9:49 AM
A very strong write and a fine memory of a father's sacrifice for his son! Giving this one a super 7 rating and adding this to my fav list too. For it reminds me of my own father's sacrifices for each of his 11 children. BBravooooooo!!!!!
Yaseen Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 12:16 AM
Many many thanks Mr. Robert for reading my poem and a seven rating. it is your greatness that you consider my poem as one of your favourites and i feel that i have done a good job when my poetry remind someone, something.. it really feels great.. God bless you..
Mehta Avatar
September 19, 2014 at 5:57 AM
Nice memory recalled with emotion, congrats, Malik
Yaseen Avatar
September 19, 2014 at 6:45 AM
Many many thanks Dr. Mehta for encouraging me, it is really not less than an award that people like you appreciate my work.. God bless you.
Palli Avatar
September 19, 2014 at 12:52 AM
Excellent write! Could feel the emotion.
Yaseen Avatar
September 19, 2014 at 1:54 AM
thanks Palli for stopping by.
Phookan Avatar
September 18, 2014 at 6:40 AM
I'll remember this poem I think, it conveys very well that what you so strongly felt. Beautiful Malik!!!Thanks for appreciating my poem... smiles
Yaseen Avatar
September 18, 2014 at 7:08 AM
Thanks for stopping by, for reading and liking my poem and for your kind words. stay blessed.. Malik
Mcdaid Avatar
September 17, 2014 at 6:42 PM
very beautifully penned piece malik
Yaseen Avatar
September 17, 2014 at 11:00 PM
thanks a lot Liam... god bless
Mcconnell Avatar
September 17, 2014 at 12:59 PM
nicely done Malik, a fine piece, take care, Gordon
Yaseen Avatar
September 17, 2014 at 10:59 PM
Thanks Gordon for your time..
Nawn Avatar
September 16, 2014 at 11:22 PM
I like the style of your writing, Malik Yaseen.
Yaseen Avatar
September 16, 2014 at 11:29 PM
Thanks JAKE, for liking and reading my poem... Stay blessed..
Bernard Avatar
September 16, 2014 at 9:15 AM
Well done Malik....Tricia ....good luck:)
Yaseen Avatar
September 16, 2014 at 10:51 PM
Thanks Tricia for your time.
Kendrick Avatar
September 16, 2014 at 7:56 AM
Unique and creative work for the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Yaseen Avatar
September 16, 2014 at 8:01 AM
Thanks a lot Sara for your compliment. God bless you
Andresen Avatar
September 16, 2014 at 6:49 AM
- A really great poem - very well written !!! - Take care of your unforgettable moment,Malik ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Yaseen Avatar
September 16, 2014 at 6:51 AM
Thanks Anne for your time, and for the kind words.... Have a nice time. :) Malik
Kamoonpuri Avatar
September 16, 2014 at 3:47 AM
Wow an impressive poem on utopia and carefree phases of life. I enjoyd reading the lines. Pls do review my latest poem too.
Yaseen Avatar
September 16, 2014 at 4:32 AM
Thanks Zaynub for reading me and for liking my poem.. For sure i will check your posts... Malik
Walker  Avatar
September 16, 2014 at 12:01 AM
Nice Malik... Rated and enjoyed... Verlena
Yaseen Avatar
September 16, 2014 at 12:07 AM
Thanks Dear Verlena for stopping by and reading my poem... Stay blessed
Dietrich Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 10:43 PM
wow, that is quite a memory and I really love how you put it into the context of what was happening in your life. it shows a very sensitive person! good poem.
Yaseen Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 11:44 PM
Thanks Andrea for stopping by and giving time to read me, and many thanks for your love and nicest comment. Stay blessed
Kapoor Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 11:04 AM
Beautiful lines Yaseen. I really liked the most striking lines, Those were my green and salad days, My friends, my toys were all my wealth.' My good wishes for you and for your family members, who are in Jammu and Kashmir. Will be visiting your other poems soon. Love and best wishes ...Ravindra K Kapoor
Yaseen Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 11:43 PM
Many many thanks Mr Ravindra for your visit and your kind and affectionate words. You are kind, rich from heart. God bless you.. Malik
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