Sara Kendrick Poet Pantoum

Unforgettable Fire

Two poor country boys in their 'tweens
Going to the circus was a dream
Wild animals; all kinds of shows
Into the huge tent they would go

Going to the circus was a dream
Who could have possibly forseen
Into the hugh tent they would go
Just seated someone screamed," Fire"

Who could have possibly forseen
Wild animals; all kinds of shows
Just seated someone screamed,"Fire"
Two poor country boys in their 'tweens

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James Fraser September 6, 2009 at 8:31 AM Nice spin off from the other poem Sara, koolio>>James

Jayne Eggins September 6, 2009 at 12:16 AM This is sadly poignant but witty as John said ... loved it ... kind regards Jayne

John Freeman September 5, 2009 at 11:45 AM Witty beautiful form, Sara, All your comments greatly appreciated on my poetry, God bless your darling heart, Sincerely Moses

Charmaine Chircop September 5, 2009 at 9:52 AM heartfelt and so sad, can imagine the scene--of the unforgettable fire--charma