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Unforgettable Fire

Two poor country boys in their 'tweens Going to the circus was a dream Wild animals; all kinds of shows Into the huge tent they would go Going to the circus was a dream Who could have possibly forseen Into the hugh tent they would go Just seated someone screamed," Fire" Who could have possibly forseen Wild animals; all kinds of shows Just seated someone screamed,"Fire" Two poor country boys in their 'tweens

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Date: 9/6/2009 8:31:00 AM
Nice spin off from the other poem Sara, koolio>>James
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Date: 9/6/2009 12:16:00 AM
This is sadly poignant but witty as John said ... loved it ... kind regards Jayne
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Date: 9/5/2009 11:45:00 AM
Witty beautiful form, Sara, All your comments greatly appreciated on my poetry, God bless your darling heart, Sincerely Moses
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Date: 9/5/2009 9:52:00 AM
heartfelt and so sad, can imagine the scene--of the unforgettable fire--charma
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