Unfinished, Unloved

I never got to finish the poem I was writing for you–a pitiful ending in itself.
It lives on the shelf in the shadowy far right corner of my bedroom,
With an overflowing pile of other dusty junk that I will never look at
again but can’t bring myself to throw away.
Silently begging for a flood or fire to get rid of it for me.

I fall in love with the birds at my window; who end up taking flight
without warning,
Trying to find a better place to make their home.
They remind me of you,
And I finally unclench my cramping fists and let myself cry into the
palms of my hands.

How am I supposed to mourn something that I never quite held?
When does it stop?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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June 25, 2024 at 7:56 PM
Dear Lily, the ache, the heartbreak pours from your poetic pen in the most beautifully sad way. Rich imagery and metaphors brings me easily into your angst, pain and reflection. I especially loved "Silently begging for a flood or fire to get rid of it for me" and the evocative, poignant metaphor with the "birds at my window".. so expressive in capturing your thoughts and comparing their farewell flight to your lost love. A deeply moving piece. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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