Unfinished

On the Potter's wheel
I am clay - 
sticky, messy red clay,
being kneaded like bread,
'till pliable.
In firm but gentle hands
the Potter molds and shapes me into
a vessel of honor,
a vessel worthy of a King.
God is not finished with me yet.

A diamond in the rough am I,
A chunk of rock.
But, as the Master Jeweler
chip, chip, chips away my impurities,
bit by bit,
I begin to sparkle, I begin to shine,
'till that final day when I'll be transformed
into a pure exquisite diamond.
A diamond fit for a King.
God is not finished with me yet.

My life is an unfinished tapestry.
Day by day my Creator
carefully, deliberately
weaves a thread here,
snips a thread there.
When my life comes to an end,
the tapestry will be complete.
I will be perfected.
Until then,
God is not finished with me yet.

9/23/12
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Rushing Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 7:34 PM
Cograts on being on the winner's list, great write! God bless Kim!
Merryman Avatar
January 19, 2022 at 6:18 AM
Thank you, Wren!
Kendrick Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 4:17 AM
I liked this winner. Congrats on it being on the winners' list. Way to go. Sara
Merryman Avatar
January 19, 2022 at 6:18 AM
Thank you, Sara!
George Avatar
January 17, 2022 at 12:37 AM
This is so beautiful ! He keeps on remodeling us until we become so perfect ! Lovely poem.... ! Congratulations on your great win Kim.
Merryman Avatar
January 19, 2022 at 6:18 AM
Thank you so much, Valsa!
Bowden Avatar
January 16, 2022 at 11:49 PM
This is so clever and thoughtful. You’re right, God’s not finished with any of us. God bless.
Merryman Avatar
January 19, 2022 at 6:17 AM
Thank you, Craig!
Alex Avatar
January 16, 2022 at 6:58 AM
"God is not finished with me yet" - This speaks volumes. The poem is full of philosophy and spirituality. Beautiful.
Merryman Avatar
January 19, 2022 at 6:17 AM
Thank you, Christuraj!
Zerbst Avatar
January 15, 2013 at 3:02 PM
Wow! This is a great poem. Sometimes we do feel like we are being chipped, but the process makes us more beautiful with each one. I added you to my favourites list the other day.
Zungu Avatar
November 21, 2012 at 12:18 AM
Hi.Very nice poem Kim.
Johnson Avatar
September 27, 2012 at 8:57 PM
Congrats on your 1st place win Kim. It's intriguing to greet the day awaiting all the wonder. May you have many wonderfilled days becoming God's creation.
Patrikar Avatar
September 26, 2012 at 9:21 AM
a well deserved win! congratulations :)
Brown Avatar
September 26, 2012 at 5:05 AM
Congratulations on your win in Catie's contest Kim. Love, Carol
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
September 26, 2012 at 12:27 AM
Congratulation Kim lovely poem xx
Macfarlane Avatar
September 25, 2012 at 1:25 PM
This poem is honorable, shiny and perfect Kim! Congrats on your win! Hugs
Gasun Avatar
September 25, 2012 at 8:03 AM
Wow!!! Excellent write, Kim!! I love it and I will include this in my favourites!! Thank you so much! HERE'S MY HUGE HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR BIG/FIRST PLACE WIN!!! love and hugs:) Leonora
Horsman Avatar
September 25, 2012 at 5:45 AM
Kim this is a worthy winner, wonderful and very creative, just love this...
Sefunmi Avatar
September 25, 2012 at 2:52 AM
This is lovely Kim! I enjoyed reading this. I know too that God is not finished with me yet. Thanks for sharing this. Congrats on your win!
Pettit Avatar
September 24, 2012 at 10:52 PM
No wonder this wonderful piece won first place in Catie's contest. Very well written!
Dietrich Avatar
September 24, 2012 at 10:31 PM
Hey, KIim, we used a lot of the same "materials" in our free verse poems but just took them to use in different ways. it was cool for me to see yours just now and BIG congrats on your well deserved win.
Alvez Avatar
September 24, 2012 at 8:29 PM
Kim, how absolutely divine! Congratulations on your first place win!...well deserved! Cynthia
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 24, 2012 at 8:11 PM
Thank you Kim. I was just reading yours and I love the way you incorporate God's hand in our creation into your poem. It is a beautiful poem and deserving of winning First Place. Congratulations! Somehow everyone seems to think I was writing about flowers. LoL so I added a note to my poem.
Arowolo Avatar
September 24, 2012 at 4:14 PM
Wow!Fantastic piece,Kim...Great write...Yes!God has not finished with us,we tend towards perfection each day..I love this ..Congratulations on your superb win..Well deserved...Kudos to you,pal.
May Avatar
September 24, 2012 at 1:13 PM
congrats on your great win Kim
Grisetti Avatar
September 24, 2012 at 9:49 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem.
A   Avatar
September 24, 2012 at 9:33 AM
Kim, a very unshaken way to describe YOU,, in a metaphoric way.. Congratulations with your awesome win in Catie's "Metaphorically Speaking" contest. Have yourself a nice day~ LUV*PD
Guzzi Avatar
September 24, 2012 at 9:30 AM
So cool Kim...and who knows you may come back again as a Queen! ;) Light & Love
Guzzi Avatar
September 24, 2012 at 9:30 AM
Ooopsie CONGRAD's
Richards Avatar
September 24, 2012 at 9:18 AM
I am so happy Catie chose this for her winner! Good for you, Kim!!!!!! Congratulations are well deserved!
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