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Unfinished

(for all poets who cannot stop revising) I am not finished I am never finished In the poet’s head I am kneaded indefinitely I am not finished often typed put in writing spread imaginary I am always one step ahead of the poet I am never finished forever young because the poet smooths my wrinkles forever and ever But am I finished when the poet is finished? Or do I get a legal guardian and an unwrinkled future?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/7/2016 8:28:00 AM
Ha, love it
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Date: 7/6/2011 7:17:00 AM
I am enjoying reading the very diverse poetry here this morning in my Soupland. Words pouring onto paper from poets souls. What a joy to be able to sit and read such wonderful poetry for awhile today. Have a very good day Niels. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/6/2011 7:01:00 AM
funny....i like the creativity in this poem....original idea.
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