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Unfettered Words

Sometimes, there is, between the lines, a silence, that trembles with unspoken goodbyes Expectant and charged, like a theater scene, in the moments before the curtains rise. In the dream that I'm in, I am southward bound, so I assume it is autumn And it resounds through the changing season with the words never said, things never did and with more forgiveness, and threads of reason and understanding .... Debris fills the gutters, and shades are drawn Wild thorn-berries have been picked, Trees are barren, naked, without a sound Grief is thick, from the fog that was a cloud And through limbs of questions never asked, each branch has stretched with some neglect and light of sun, still filters through holding deep regret Leaves are adrift, as if disturbed, littering a speachless sky Unfettered words we never cried clamor up against the sky still pleading to be heard. Leaves are crushed and swept away, by a bridled hesitation. No summer arias have ever been sung, and words to say have disappeared. Vaporized and turned to dust Sunlight dims, and I am thrust into the void of too many wasted years ______________________________________________ 100 In A Row Contest: #18 Sponsor PD

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Date: 3/31/2015 5:17:00 PM
Hi Carrie: Your words are certainly liberating My compliments!
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Date: 8/6/2014 10:28:00 PM
AWESOME WIN...PD
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Date: 8/5/2014 5:36:00 PM
Absolutely stunning poetry my friend...SO melancholy and elegantly written as is your usual...Many congrats - Tim
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Date: 8/4/2014 10:46:00 PM
Beautifully dream't...and said, loved it!
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Date: 8/4/2014 7:40:00 PM
to the point and quite beautifully written full of nature's wonder Carrie I love it hugs
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Date: 8/4/2014 5:42:00 PM
just seeing this one again. I am SO in awe of it, I gotta fave it.
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Date: 8/4/2014 1:10:00 PM
Awesome! Congrats on your first place :)
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Date: 8/4/2014 5:05:00 AM
Congrats...Sara
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Date: 8/2/2014 11:41:00 AM
Just exquisite! Brilliantly written! Congratulations on the TOP win, Carrie!
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Date: 8/2/2014 8:18:00 AM
Carrie, you raked these leaves into a poetic pile and assembled quite a colorful picture. Congrats on the win. well earned.
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Date: 8/2/2014 1:52:00 AM
so utterly gorgeous and how you compare the words to leaves. BIG congrats on your very well deserved win, Carrie.
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Date: 8/2/2014 1:27:00 AM
Beautiful words used to describe the varied hues of emotions and nature. Many many congratulations for the win!
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Date: 8/2/2014 1:08:00 AM
Wonderful imagery n write Carrie,, congrats on top win!
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Date: 8/2/2014 12:22:00 AM
A clear demonstration of mastery, Carrie.....especially clever touches like "leadlight/pleading" and "leaves(verb)/leaves(noun)" and subtle consonance in "trembles/hallows" to mention only a few.......I found it a learning experience.....well done indeed and thank you....best wishes Syd
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Date: 8/1/2014 11:11:00 PM
Beautiful poem and Congratulations. God bless you. Autumn is my favorite season, too - Just love this!!!
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Date: 8/1/2014 6:58:00 PM
Wow Carrie...such rich imagery....beautiful... Congratulations Tim
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Date: 8/1/2014 6:48:00 PM
Lovely, lovely. You always amaze me. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/1/2014 6:41:00 PM
Lovely and vibrant imagery that makes autumn look so attractive. Congrats, Carrie, on a very deserved top podium. // paul
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Date: 8/1/2014 6:35:00 PM
Congratulations to you Carrie for this beautifully written poem. Verlena
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Date: 8/1/2014 5:44:00 PM
Carrie, adore this wonderful piece...I must admit I am a little giddy right now over our first placements. I just wasn't sure how my piece would be received. So happy to share this top spot with you.
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Date: 8/1/2014 4:47:00 PM
carrie, your work is always so soulful, and this is a very beautiful piece, rich in imagery and description - I knew as soon as I read it that it was destined for a top placement! (just one tiny thing: on the ninth line use 'have' instead of 'had' to bring it into present tense) congrats on your 1st place in my contest! :)
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Carrie Richards
Date: 8/1/2014 5:09:00 PM
Wow.........thank you so much Charlotte, you always make me feel more confident in my writing, and inspire me to try harder. I admire your own free style poetry so much, that this is indeed an honor. And thanks too, for catching that ninth-line oversight ! I am always grateful for someone's third eye!!
Date: 7/30/2014 4:37:00 PM
Goodbyes are sometimes sad but this one is very expressive and colorful..Enjoyed reading your creative lines today..Sara
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Date: 7/30/2014 1:24:00 PM
For the love of all that is good, I've missed reading you. This piece captured me to no end. Incredibly done!
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Date: 7/30/2014 11:08:00 AM
Dear Carrie, An amazing description of the coming of autumn with leaves turning colors and days growing shorter. Each line is beautiful and I especially admire "No summer aria has been sung and the words go unsaid." There is deep meaning well below the surface of this verse and I'm sure it will be a winner. Always pulling for you in the contests, dear. You are such a wonderful writer! Love, Carolyn
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 7/30/2014 11:09:00 AM
Oh, and thank you for telling me about the owl you rescued. It took a lot of effort to save it and I'm so glad it had a compassionate friend like you (and your husband).
Date: 7/30/2014 3:05:00 AM
Wow! this is certainly vibrant verse, Carrie. I read this one three times and get something new with each reading. very powerful and vivid with imagery. Such a pleasure to read... Robert.
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