Unfettered Words

Sometimes, there is, between the lines,
a silence, that trembles with unspoken goodbyes
Expectant and charged, like a theater scene,
in the moments before the curtains rise.

In the dream that I'm in, I am southward bound, 
so I assume it is autumn 
And it resounds through the changing season
with the words never said,  things never did
and with more forgiveness, and threads
of reason and understanding
....

Debris fills the gutters, and shades are drawn
Wild thorn-berries have been picked,
Trees are barren, naked, without a sound
Grief is thick, from the fog that was a cloud
And through limbs of questions never asked, 
each branch has stretched with some neglect
and light of sun, still filters through
holding deep regret

Leaves are adrift, as if disturbed,
littering a speachless sky
Unfettered words we never cried
clamor up against the sky
still pleading to be heard.

Leaves are crushed and swept away,
by a bridled hesitation.

No summer arias have ever been sung,
and words to say have disappeared.
Vaporized and turned to dust
Sunlight dims, and I am thrust
into the void of too many wasted years






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100 In A Row Contest: #18
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Sergi Avatar
March 31, 2015 at 5:17 PM
Hi Carrie: Your words are certainly liberating My compliments!
A   Avatar
August 6, 2014 at 10:28 PM
AWESOME WIN...PD
Ryerson Avatar
August 5, 2014 at 5:36 PM
Absolutely stunning poetry my friend...SO melancholy and elegantly written as is your usual...Many congrats - Tim
Trichet Avatar
August 4, 2014 at 10:46 PM
Beautifully dream't...and said, loved it!
Hamilton Avatar
August 4, 2014 at 7:40 PM
to the point and quite beautifully written full of nature's wonder Carrie I love it hugs
Dietrich Avatar
August 4, 2014 at 5:42 PM
just seeing this one again. I am SO in awe of it, I gotta fave it.
Nance Avatar
August 4, 2014 at 1:10 PM
Awesome! Congrats on your first place :)
Kendrick Avatar
August 4, 2014 at 5:05 AM
Congrats...Sara
Sietesantos Avatar
August 2, 2014 at 11:41 AM
Just exquisite! Brilliantly written! Congratulations on the TOP win, Carrie!
Lawless Avatar
August 2, 2014 at 8:18 AM
Carrie, you raked these leaves into a poetic pile and assembled quite a colorful picture. Congrats on the win. well earned.
Dietrich Avatar
August 2, 2014 at 1:52 AM
so utterly gorgeous and how you compare the words to leaves. BIG congrats on your very well deserved win, Carrie.
Sharma Avatar
August 2, 2014 at 1:27 AM
Beautiful words used to describe the varied hues of emotions and nature. Many many congratulations for the win!
A. Sharma Avatar
August 2, 2014 at 1:08 AM
Wonderful imagery n write Carrie,, congrats on top win!
Beck Avatar
August 2, 2014 at 12:22 AM
A clear demonstration of mastery, Carrie.....especially clever touches like "leadlight/pleading" and "leaves(verb)/leaves(noun)" and subtle consonance in "trembles/hallows" to mention only a few.......I found it a learning experience.....well done indeed and thank you....best wishes Syd
Mcintosh Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 11:11 PM
Beautiful poem and Congratulations. God bless you. Autumn is my favorite season, too - Just love this!!!
Smith Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 6:58 PM
Wow Carrie...such rich imagery....beautiful... Congratulations Tim
Johnson Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 6:48 PM
Lovely, lovely. You always amaze me. Love, Joyce
Callus Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 6:41 PM
Lovely and vibrant imagery that makes autumn look so attractive. Congrats, Carrie, on a very deserved top podium. // paul
Walker  Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 6:35 PM
Congratulations to you Carrie for this beautifully written poem. Verlena
Gibson Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 5:44 PM
Carrie, adore this wonderful piece...I must admit I am a little giddy right now over our first placements. I just wasn't sure how my piece would be received. So happy to share this top spot with you.
Puddifoot Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 4:47 PM
carrie, your work is always so soulful, and this is a very beautiful piece, rich in imagery and description - I knew as soon as I read it that it was destined for a top placement! (just one tiny thing: on the ninth line use 'have' instead of 'had' to bring it into present tense) congrats on your 1st place in my contest! :)
Richards Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 5:09 PM
Wow.........thank you so much Charlotte, you always make me feel more confident in my writing, and inspire me to try harder. I admire your own free style poetry so much, that this is indeed an honor. And thanks too, for catching that ninth-line oversight ! I am always grateful for someone's third eye!!
Kendrick Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 4:37 PM
Goodbyes are sometimes sad but this one is very expressive and colorful..Enjoyed reading your creative lines today..Sara
Tacito Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 1:24 PM
For the love of all that is good, I've missed reading you. This piece captured me to no end. Incredibly done!
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July 30, 2014 at 11:08 AM
Dear Carrie, An amazing description of the coming of autumn with leaves turning colors and days growing shorter. Each line is beautiful and I especially admire "No summer aria has been sung and the words go unsaid." There is deep meaning well below the surface of this verse and I'm sure it will be a winner. Always pulling for you in the contests, dear. You are such a wonderful writer! Love, Carolyn
Devonshire Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 11:09 AM
Oh, and thank you for telling me about the owl you rescued. It took a lot of effort to save it and I'm so glad it had a compassionate friend like you (and your husband).
Nehls Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 3:05 AM
Wow! this is certainly vibrant verse, Carrie. I read this one three times and get something new with each reading. very powerful and vivid with imagery. Such a pleasure to read... Robert.
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