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Unfavorable Winds

Fabled America is slipping away, surely you’ve felt it, like wind knocking a weather vane in another direction. At some unnoticed moment we decided to ignore realities as a man intent on drowning himself plows heedlessly through the waves.

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Date: 10/11/2021 7:11:00 PM
Another thought inducing read with strong images. Your poetic gifts are nicely wrapped. I hope university brings you self fulfillment + more. Best wishes, Brian
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Date: 10/7/2021 11:22:00 AM
Did your mum write to you about Trump 's 2024 Election Rally in Georgia?
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Date: 10/7/2021 3:00:00 PM
No! When was THAT?
Date: 10/7/2021 8:21:00 AM
I am seeing more and more of this "like a man intent on drowning himself plows headlessly through the waves."
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Date: 10/7/2021 3:00:00 PM
Ahh.. too bad, I was hoping Drake would use it in a song - oh well
Date: 10/7/2021 4:19:00 AM
Well, I do not know much about the political situations in America. Ours is, indeed, bad in India. I like your Beautiful metaphor and imagery.
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Anais Vionet
Date: 10/7/2021 3:01:00 PM
Thank you!

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