Elizabeth Mccann Poet Rhyme

Unfathomed

Unfathomed

Consciousness swims slick outside my fingers,
Trembling perceptions pure and round.
Infinitely slow I close my grip, 
Entrapping, and watch them drown.



Elizabeth McCann

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Lady Labyrinth November 13, 2022 at 4:18 AM I felt this. Whether what it was you felt, thought or not, is a matter of individual perspective. Love this poem of yours. You may or may not like the poem I wrote around what it made me think. L Elizabeth Mccann November 13, 2022 at 1:06 PM Lady, I am honored to have touched you. Elizabeth