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unexpected

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              lines are lengthy
inside this liquid language.
   -   somewhat unique  -
     
      ( our unknown )
 a mysterious masterpiece 
   eager to be,
unveiled and understood.

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   falling in love :
         so unexpected
                  
                  ~*~ 


~ ~ floating like a feather
            in a soft scribble  ~ ~ 

Copyright © Brandy Nicole | Year Posted 2024

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Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 11/7/2024 11:06:00 AM Hello Brandy this poem is nicely done. Hugs. /Darlene/ Login to Reply Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 11/8/2024 10:51:00 AM Hello Brandy, I hope you have a nice day my friend. /Darlene// Hugs. Brandy Nicole Date: 11/7/2024 5:40:00 PM Thank you, Darlene. So kind of you to say. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Valsa George Date: 11/5/2024 8:42:00 PM Hi dear Brandy, Love gives us wings and we float in the ether like a sprite. Your verse too is so filmy and floats like a feather. Falling in love is so unexpected and accidental. We do not know when Cupid hits us with his arrow. Lovely poem flavored with the sweetness of love. The slanting font you choose for your poems make them all the more appealing. Love and hugs, dear. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 11/7/2024 5:39:00 PM Dear Valsa, your graceful vocabulary always leaves me in complete awe. So delicate and dreamy are your thoughts, my sweet friend. That unexpected moment will make you feel like you're a feather floating through the wind. Such a wonderful feeling, indeed. So kind of you to mention the format within, and the how it enhances the mood. :) Thank you for your lovely comment, and all the beautiful compliments. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Mike Gentile Date: 11/3/2024 5:14:00 AM Love, sweet love, indeed so unexpected even after a lifetime of yearning. Your words seem to also float like a feather to gracefully light up my mind! Such a lovely write! Happy Sunday xxoo Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 11/3/2024 5:40:00 PM Yes, it's sweet love indeed. A beautiful longing continues to linger, until the heart begins to flutter. So unexpectedly. I'm smiling knowing that my thoughts float through your mind. Thank you Mike, for your lovely comment. Happy Sunday to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 10/28/2024 8:19:00 AM Brandy dear friend, your poetic love scribbles never fail to wow me and float my boat! 'A mysterious masterpiece eager to be unveiled and understood' - so so true! Love and blessings, Jennifer. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 11/3/2024 5:28:00 PM Jennifer, your cute little rhyme brings a smile to my heart. :) I'm so happy that my poetry leaves you floating. Thank you for sharing your favorite thought within. I appreciate you. Many wonderful blessings to you, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/26/2024 1:08:00 AM I love this, Brandy. A fave Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 10/26/2024 6:21:00 PM Thank you Andrea. So kind of you to place this in your favorites. My heart is smiling. :) Hugs, Brandy

Rob Carmack Date: 10/22/2024 1:47:00 PM Love is one of our best gifts. My favorite lines: floating like a feather in a soft scribble Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 10/22/2024 6:52:00 PM Such a wonderful gift, indeed. Thank you Rob, for saying this thought is one of your favorites. I appreciate you. Welcome back, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy

Eileen Manassian Date: 10/21/2024 9:56:00 PM This can settle in someone's heart softly and gently... an awakening of love. I love the cursive in purple. Your emphasis on certain words.... You are not only a poet, but an artist. Blessings Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 10/22/2024 6:48:00 PM It certainly can, Eileen. Love is a tender whisper in the wind. Such a wonderful thing to say about me and my poetry. I truly appreciate the compliment. Thank you for sharing your thoughts about the color and the font used. My heart smiles, knowing that you love it. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

David Crandall Date: 10/21/2024 8:27:00 PM Ahh, falling in love...been a long time, but there's nothing like it. I like: "a mysterious masterpiece eager to be, unveiled and understood." Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 10/22/2024 6:42:00 PM Hi David, you absolutely right about falling in love. It's an amazing feeling. Thank you for sharing your favorite thought within. Your kind words bring a smile. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Abdullah Alhemaidy Date: 10/16/2024 6:38:00 PM Hello lovely Brandy :-) It's beautiful and lovely poem to read in fall season. Hugs ~ AA Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 10/16/2024 6:47:00 PM Thank you, AA. Such a sweet thing to say. :) You and your thoughts are appreciated. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Len Gasun Date: 10/14/2024 1:10:00 AM Falling in love lifts one high like a feather.. so beautiful my dear poet friend. Thanks for sharing. I love it. Blessings to you always. Hugs Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 10/16/2024 6:45:00 PM Dear Len, love is beautiful indeed. It certainly makes the heart float like a feather. :) I appreciate you and your lovely comment. Your kindness brings a smile. Thank you, my sweet friend. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Victor Buhagiar Date: 10/13/2024 3:07:00 AM Love is the apex of life. So cute. Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 10/14/2024 8:58:00 PM Smiling at you, Victor. :) Thank you for saying this is cute. Falling in love feels like floating, indeed. My best to you, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy

Daniel Henry Rodgers Date: 10/11/2024 5:50:00 AM Dear Brandy, How did I miss this little gem? I loved how your artistically inked words portray love and creativity as complex yet beautiful experiences that unfold in unexpected ways. Beautiful! Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 10/11/2024 7:37:00 PM Daniel, I'm smiling at you. :) While finding this gem has been a nice surprise for you, your beautiful comment has brought a smile to my heart. Thank you for this clever and poetic review. Many wonderful blessings to you, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy

Nette Onclaud Date: 10/10/2024 6:10:00 PM love gives off this peaceful, contented vibe much like the steady mood of your artword, brandy...so nice! Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 10/11/2024 7:32:00 PM Dear Nette, falling in love creates a beautiful mood indeed. The heart has wings. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Michael Tor Date: 10/7/2024 6:08:00 PM I love your tender way of writing about falling in love Brandy. It is a gradual emotion you have captured well. Thanks for writing and sharing with us. Hugs Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 10/9/2024 5:55:00 PM Dear Michael, your kind thoughts always bring a smile. Falling and floating like a feather, indeed. In sweet love. Thank you, my dear friend. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Joseph May Date: 10/7/2024 1:59:00 PM Floating on the feathers of love's wings, Lovely write Brandy, hugs Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 10/7/2024 7:42:00 PM On the wings of love. :) It's a wonderful feeling, indeed. Thank you Joseph, for your kind words. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Hiya Sharma Date: 10/6/2024 1:18:00 AM Oh my, this is such a breathtakingly beautiful piece, dear Brandy. I absolutely adore the elegance being portrayed by your swoonworthy words ~I feel almost bewitched by the exquisite cadence here~how gorgeously you've conveyed the emotions, so enchanting. The process of slowly falling in love is so magical in itself and is unique for every soul. "lines are lengthy inside this liquid language" Love the dancing alliteration there! "floating like a feather in a soft scribble" Gosh, truly impeccable. A pleasure reading this... Sending many best wishes & light always, so glad I've been able to immerse myself in the art of your spellbinding poetry, after a long time. A fave :) Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 10/6/2024 6:39:00 PM Dear Hiya, you continue to amaze me with your beautiful thoughts. So tender and poetic, soft and sweet, all at the same time. Thank you for sharing your favorite lines within. So kind of you to place this in your favorites as well. My heart is smiling. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Sara Kendrick Date: 10/1/2024 3:31:00 AM Interesting concept of how we fall in love. I would always hope that feather had a soft landing and not get caught up in a storm. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 10/5/2024 7:26:00 PM Love is a beautiful emotion, a soft language embracing hearts. I understand what you mean, Sara. Always hoping for light and carefree moments. Thank you for your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

John Read Date: 9/30/2024 10:52:00 AM Falling in love is the greatest feeling, I'm in my seventies now, so I have to make do with the memories. God bless you Brandy. Xx Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 9/30/2024 6:34:00 PM It's a wonderful feeling, indeed. Memories are amazing in so many ways. :) I appreciate you and your kind words. My best to you, John. :) Hugs, Brandy

Paige Hind Date: 9/27/2024 6:19:00 PM Great to read you again! What a truly lovely piece of art! <3 It's so beautiful, with your unique touch and tastes! Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 9/28/2024 7:33:00 PM Dear Paige, your kindness doesn't go unnoticed. I appreciate you noticing the form and for commenting on my unique style. My heart is smiling. Thank you for sharing your thoughts on the picture as well. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Tom Woody Date: 9/27/2024 8:12:00 AM Back to reread this gem this morn. "Take my hand, take my whole life too, for I can't help falling in love with you." Elvis' song comes to mind. Hope I quoted it right. Have a sweet day Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 9/27/2024 9:12:00 AM Such a fitting song to place here, and you're right on the lyrics. You're thoughts bring a smile, Tommy. :) Thank you. I hope your day is amazing in every way.

Arlo Parker Date: 9/22/2024 9:07:00 AM Falling in love knows no barriers...exultant joy overwhelms. A delight, BL. More. ;o)) Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 9/22/2024 5:37:00 PM Like a feather drifting through the wind. :) On the wings of love. Thank you, Arlo. More when the time is right. :)

Susan Ashley Date: 9/21/2024 8:48:00 PM Dearest Brandy, your enchanting way with words is as exquisite as the feeling of falling in love. I adore every verse as you capture these feathery feelings with poetic finesse. I’m captured in the allure of your artistry and alliteration so beautifully done. Warmest wishes and hugs my sweet friend.. ~Susan Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 9/22/2024 5:23:00 PM Dear Susan, like a tender melody, your thoughts caress gently around my heart. You always leave me in complete awe with all your kind words and compliments. Falling in love is such an incredible feeling. Like floating on a cloud. Soft, sweet and poetic are your thoughts. They bring a smile. :) Thank you my dear friend. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Tom Woody Date: 9/21/2024 8:34:00 PM So sweetly alliterative. There's something about new love, it can't be compared to anything else. The heart sings. You've captured the moment majestically Login to Reply Brandy Nicole Date: 9/22/2024 5:10:00 PM Appreciate the compliment, Tommy. :) You're right, it's a beautiful, magical moment indeed. The heart flutters. Thank you for your lovely comment. :) Hugs, Brandy