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              lines are lengthy
inside this liquid language.
   -   somewhat unique -

      ( our unknown )
a mysterious masterpiece
   eager to be,
unveiled and understood.

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falling in love :
         so unexpected

                  ~*~

~ ~ floating like a feather
in a soft scribble ~ ~

unexpected




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              lines are lengthy
inside this liquid language.
   -   somewhat unique  -
     
      ( our unknown )
 a mysterious masterpiece 
   eager to be,
unveiled and understood.

   ---------------------------
     

   falling in love :
         so unexpected
                  
                  ~*~ 


~ ~ floating like a feather
            in a soft scribble  ~ ~

Copyright © Brandy Nicole | Year Posted 2024

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Darlene De Beaulieu

November 7, 2024 at 11:06 AM

Hello Brandy this poem is nicely done. Hugs. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu

November 8, 2024 at 10:51 AM

Hello Brandy, I hope you have a nice day my friend. /Darlene// Hugs.

November 7, 2024 at 5:40 PM

Thank you, Darlene. So kind of you to say. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

November 5, 2024 at 8:42 PM

Hi dear Brandy, Love gives us wings and we float in the ether like a sprite. Your verse too is so filmy and floats like a feather. Falling in love is so unexpected and accidental. We do not know when Cupid hits us with his arrow. Lovely poem flavored with the sweetness of love. The slanting font you choose for your poems make them all the more appealing. Love and hugs, dear.

November 7, 2024 at 5:39 PM

Dear Valsa, your graceful vocabulary always leaves me in complete awe. So delicate and dreamy are your thoughts, my sweet friend. That unexpected moment will make you feel like you're a feather floating through the wind. Such a wonderful feeling, indeed. So kind of you to mention the format within, and the how it enhances the mood. :) Thank you for your lovely comment, and all the beautiful compliments. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

November 3, 2024 at 5:14 AM

Love, sweet love, indeed so unexpected even after a lifetime of yearning. Your words seem to also float like a feather to gracefully light up my mind! Such a lovely write! Happy Sunday xxoo

November 3, 2024 at 5:40 PM

Yes, it's sweet love indeed. A beautiful longing continues to linger, until the heart begins to flutter. So unexpectedly. I'm smiling knowing that my thoughts float through your mind. Thank you Mike, for your lovely comment. Happy Sunday to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Jennifer Proxenos

October 28, 2024 at 8:19 AM

Brandy dear friend, your poetic love scribbles never fail to wow me and float my boat! 'A mysterious masterpiece eager to be unveiled and understood' - so so true! Love and blessings, Jennifer.

November 3, 2024 at 5:28 PM

Jennifer, your cute little rhyme brings a smile to my heart. :) I'm so happy that my poetry leaves you floating. Thank you for sharing your favorite thought within. I appreciate you. Many wonderful blessings to you, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy

Andrea Dietrich

October 26, 2024 at 1:08 AM

I love this, Brandy. A fave

October 26, 2024 at 6:21 PM

Thank you Andrea. So kind of you to place this in your favorites. My heart is smiling. :) Hugs, Brandy

October 22, 2024 at 1:47 PM

Love is one of our best gifts. My favorite lines: floating like a feather in a soft scribble

October 22, 2024 at 6:52 PM

Such a wonderful gift, indeed. Thank you Rob, for saying this thought is one of your favorites. I appreciate you. Welcome back, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy

Eileen Manassian

October 21, 2024 at 9:56 PM

This can settle in someone's heart softly and gently... an awakening of love. I love the cursive in purple. Your emphasis on certain words.... You are not only a poet, but an artist. Blessings

October 22, 2024 at 6:48 PM

It certainly can, Eileen. Love is a tender whisper in the wind. Such a wonderful thing to say about me and my poetry. I truly appreciate the compliment. Thank you for sharing your thoughts about the color and the font used. My heart smiles, knowing that you love it. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

October 21, 2024 at 8:27 PM

Ahh, falling in love...been a long time, but there's nothing like it. I like: "a mysterious masterpiece eager to be, unveiled and understood."

October 22, 2024 at 6:42 PM

Hi David, you absolutely right about falling in love. It's an amazing feeling. Thank you for sharing your favorite thought within. Your kind words bring a smile. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Abdullah Alhemaidy

October 16, 2024 at 6:38 PM

Hello lovely Brandy :-) It's beautiful and lovely poem to read in fall season. Hugs ~ AA

October 16, 2024 at 6:47 PM

Thank you, AA. Such a sweet thing to say. :) You and your thoughts are appreciated. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

October 14, 2024 at 1:10 AM

Falling in love lifts one high like a feather.. so beautiful my dear poet friend. Thanks for sharing. I love it. Blessings to you always. Hugs

October 16, 2024 at 6:45 PM

Dear Len, love is beautiful indeed. It certainly makes the heart float like a feather. :) I appreciate you and your lovely comment. Your kindness brings a smile. Thank you, my sweet friend. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Victor Buhagiar

October 13, 2024 at 3:07 AM

Love is the apex of life. So cute.

October 14, 2024 at 8:58 PM

Smiling at you, Victor. :) Thank you for saying this is cute. Falling in love feels like floating, indeed. My best to you, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy

Daniel Henry Rodgers

October 11, 2024 at 5:50 AM

Dear Brandy, How did I miss this little gem? I loved how your artistically inked words portray love and creativity as complex yet beautiful experiences that unfold in unexpected ways. Beautiful! Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

October 11, 2024 at 7:37 PM

Daniel, I'm smiling at you. :) While finding this gem has been a nice surprise for you, your beautiful comment has brought a smile to my heart. Thank you for this clever and poetic review. Many wonderful blessings to you, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy

October 10, 2024 at 6:10 PM

love gives off this peaceful, contented vibe much like the steady mood of your artword, brandy...so nice!

October 11, 2024 at 7:32 PM

Dear Nette, falling in love creates a beautiful mood indeed. The heart has wings. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

October 7, 2024 at 6:08 PM

I love your tender way of writing about falling in love Brandy. It is a gradual emotion you have captured well. Thanks for writing and sharing with us. Hugs

October 9, 2024 at 5:55 PM

Dear Michael, your kind thoughts always bring a smile. Falling and floating like a feather, indeed. In sweet love. Thank you, my dear friend. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

October 7, 2024 at 1:59 PM

Floating on the feathers of love's wings, Lovely write Brandy, hugs

October 7, 2024 at 7:42 PM

On the wings of love. :) It's a wonderful feeling, indeed. Thank you Joseph, for your kind words. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

October 6, 2024 at 1:18 AM

Oh my, this is such a breathtakingly beautiful piece, dear Brandy. I absolutely adore the elegance being portrayed by your swoonworthy words ~I feel almost bewitched by the exquisite cadence here~how gorgeously you've conveyed the emotions, so enchanting. The process of slowly falling in love is so magical in itself and is unique for every soul. "lines are lengthy inside this liquid language" Love the dancing alliteration there! "floating like a feather in a soft scribble" Gosh, truly impeccable. A pleasure reading this... Sending many best wishes & light always, so glad I've been able to immerse myself in the art of your spellbinding poetry, after a long time. A fave :)

October 6, 2024 at 6:39 PM

Dear Hiya, you continue to amaze me with your beautiful thoughts. So tender and poetic, soft and sweet, all at the same time. Thank you for sharing your favorite lines within. So kind of you to place this in your favorites as well. My heart is smiling. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

October 1, 2024 at 3:31 AM

Interesting concept of how we fall in love. I would always hope that feather had a soft landing and not get caught up in a storm. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K

October 5, 2024 at 7:26 PM

Love is a beautiful emotion, a soft language embracing hearts. I understand what you mean, Sara. Always hoping for light and carefree moments. Thank you for your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

September 30, 2024 at 10:52 AM

Falling in love is the greatest feeling, I'm in my seventies now, so I have to make do with the memories. God bless you Brandy. Xx

September 30, 2024 at 6:34 PM

It's a wonderful feeling, indeed. Memories are amazing in so many ways. :) I appreciate you and your kind words. My best to you, John. :) Hugs, Brandy

September 27, 2024 at 6:19 PM

Great to read you again! What a truly lovely piece of art! <3 It's so beautiful, with your unique touch and tastes!

September 28, 2024 at 7:33 PM

Dear Paige, your kindness doesn't go unnoticed. I appreciate you noticing the form and for commenting on my unique style. My heart is smiling. Thank you for sharing your thoughts on the picture as well. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

September 22, 2024 at 9:07 AM

Falling in love knows no barriers...exultant joy overwhelms. A delight, BL. More. ;o))

September 22, 2024 at 5:37 PM

Like a feather drifting through the wind. :) On the wings of love. Thank you, Arlo. More when the time is right. :)

September 21, 2024 at 8:48 PM

Dearest Brandy, your enchanting way with words is as exquisite as the feeling of falling in love. I adore every verse as you capture these feathery feelings with poetic finesse. I’m captured in the allure of your artistry and alliteration so beautifully done. Warmest wishes and hugs my sweet friend.. ~Susan

September 22, 2024 at 5:23 PM

Dear Susan, like a tender melody, your thoughts caress gently around my heart. You always leave me in complete awe with all your kind words and compliments. Falling in love is such an incredible feeling. Like floating on a cloud. Soft, sweet and poetic are your thoughts. They bring a smile. :) Thank you my dear friend. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

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