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Unending Loneliness

Loneliness, a venom that corrodes Veins with despair and emptiness Feeling alone in a crowd Dejection is the mood Life seems to forget Your existence Dwelling in Somber Clouds 4-26-2016

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Date: 3/22/2017 8:05:00 PM
Been there b4 I must say...
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 3/22/2017 8:42:00 PM
Thank you J Hamilton.
Date: 3/15/2017 6:25:00 AM
well written and said, you have to know the blues to sing the blues
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 3/15/2017 11:44:00 AM
Thank you Cynrhis
Date: 3/2/2017 3:02:00 PM
Hi Nayda: A beautiful poignant and descriptive poem!
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 3/2/2017 5:49:00 PM
Thank you Ralph.
Date: 4/28/2016 10:49:00 AM
- Hope you have a good day - a mournful poem, wonderful written - hugs // Sun :)
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 5/2/2016 6:15:00 PM
Thank you Sunshine
Date: 4/27/2016 5:08:00 PM
Nayda, I like how you wrote this, but I don't like what caused you to write it. I pray God relieves you from this burden soon. Please remember, God will never forsake you, even when it feels like he has.
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 5/2/2016 6:16:00 PM
Thank you very much Rob. I am feeling better thank God.
Date: 4/27/2016 5:05:00 AM
I hope this is a passing phase for you. There is so much to do and share in this world. Remember, time heals.
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 5/2/2016 6:16:00 PM
Thank you Barry
Date: 4/26/2016 4:40:00 PM
oh Nayda I'm so saddened to read the poem isn't fictional - a very sad etheree - remember you always have your soup family around:-)keep on writing my friend - i have found it so cathartic in my saddest days during the last coule of years:-) hugs jan xx
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 5/2/2016 6:16:00 PM
Thank you Jan
Date: 4/26/2016 11:34:00 AM
hope you are ok Nayda, maybe hoping this is fiction? either way a wonderful etheree, be blessed :)-luloo
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 4/26/2016 1:14:00 PM
Thank you Laura. Its not fictional, but God willing I will better soon. Blessings, Nayda
Date: 4/26/2016 9:59:00 AM
Hope you will overcome your loneliness. This is just a passing phase. If you want, go through my poem "Lonely? Are You??"
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 4/26/2016 10:10:00 AM
Thank you Jo. It will pass. I will read your poem.

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