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Uneaten Cake

Neena You want your cake? And you want to eat it too? Yes Sir That's absolutely true What's the point of Wanting a cake that I can eat Did you thoroughly think Those questions through I prefer to eat the whole cake by myself But I can slice and plate a piece for you I deserve to celebrate Want my cake And eat it all So that's why I do

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Date: 6/19/2025 9:13:00 AM
Yes ! ThkU 4 writing this, Neena. I never resonated with that silly saying. Of course we want the cake + we want to eat it especially if it’s chocolate & I don’t believe it’s irreligious to sometimes eat the whole cake. X.
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