Undulations of She

Undulations of She, as water cascades In caressing touch http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/love.php
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Dietrich Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 4:23 PM
Is this on one of Raul's pictures, james? It's really nice. I guess he has put up another pic, so I better go see in case I run across more similar haiku! Luv ya, andrea
Austin Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 10:22 AM
Ah yes!...The Birth of Venus, or some such water Goddess. Good write. Love, daver
Sweetheart Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 7:10 AM
A great Haiku .. if for the contest ..good luck... Raul's photo contests are becoming quite the rage on Soup.. this I think may have a double meaning yes?? luv.. "Sweetheart"
Haick Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 8:42 PM
I like this, James...sensual. I picture a waterfall! Thank you for taking the time to read my poems and leave comments for me, my friend! Peace, Audrey
Gorelick Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 7:37 PM
Very sensual, I enjoyed it very much. BG
Kendrick Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 5:32 PM
Very descriptive and expressive write that you have posted here. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Chircop Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 5:01 PM
Sensual Haiku..I can picture the scene of a waterfall caressing,moving,curling, in the breeze...Lovely,Charma
Devonshire Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 4:45 PM
Great imagery, James, and quite erotic as well. Hope your soccer is going well. A US figure skater took the gold medal in the Olympics and the Russian silver winner is crying fowl. The cold war renews. Love, Carolyn
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