Undulations of She

Undulations of She, as water cascades In caressing touch http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/love.php

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/20/2010 4:23:00 PM

Is this on one of Raul's pictures, james? It's really nice. I guess he has put up another pic, so I better go see in case I run across more similar haiku! Luv ya, andrea

Daver Austin

Date: 2/20/2010 10:22:00 AM

Ah yes!...The Birth of Venus, or some such water Goddess. Good write. Love, daver

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/20/2010 7:10:00 AM

A great Haiku .. if for the contest ..good luck... Raul's photo contests are becoming quite the rage on Soup.. this I think may have a double meaning yes?? luv.. "Sweetheart"

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/19/2010 8:42:00 PM

I like this, James...sensual. I picture a waterfall! Thank you for taking the time to read my poems and leave comments for me, my friend! Peace, Audrey

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 2/19/2010 7:37:00 PM

Very sensual, I enjoyed it very much. BG

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/19/2010 5:32:00 PM

Very descriptive and expressive write that you have posted here. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/19/2010 5:01:00 PM

Sensual Haiku..I can picture the scene of a waterfall caressing,moving,curling, in the breeze...Lovely,Charma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/19/2010 4:45:00 PM

Great imagery, James, and quite erotic as well. Hope your soccer is going well. A US figure skater took the gold medal in the Olympics and the Russian silver winner is crying fowl. The cold war renews. Love, Carolyn