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undress my soul

I do not sing for sleeping stars~undress these riddles..my soul you'll find

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Terry Miller

December 11, 2023 at 12:54 AM

Wonderful!

Silent One

December 8, 2023 at 9:35 AM

Deep one liber...congratulations on your placement in the contest

Ink Empress

December 8, 2023 at 9:55 AM

Thank you so very much

Michelle Faulkner

December 7, 2023 at 1:00 PM

So mesmerizing and evocative, congratulations!

Ink Empress

December 8, 2023 at 9:55 AM

Ah thank you so very much kind soul

Tonye George

December 5, 2023 at 12:45 PM

There's no point singing for mannequins, they do not listen to rhythms. Nicely written!

Ink Empress

December 6, 2023 at 9:01 PM

Exactly you’ve understood my words, thank you for your thoughtful comment grateful for your support

Charles Messina

December 5, 2023 at 4:39 AM

Let the sleepers sleep...save the song for open ears. I hear you, Ink! Loud and clear (lol) Nice!

Ink Empress

December 6, 2023 at 9:01 PM

Haha i love that sleepers sleep yes, absolutely. Thank you for hearing me i appreciate your support always dear charles

Yann Rolland

December 4, 2023 at 2:12 AM

difficult to translate this one, but it sounds pure and musical and deep , enjoyed yann

Ink Empress

December 5, 2023 at 2:39 AM

Awn thank you for commenting although it is difficult to decipher. Always grateful for your kind support

Paige Hind

December 3, 2023 at 6:49 PM

How beautiful to be 'found' by someone, by what remains said, and unsaid...

Ink Empress

December 5, 2023 at 2:40 AM

Awwn thank you always for your support not everyone sees us as we are its special when they do. Thank you for seeing me as i am too

Hilda Greenhough

December 3, 2023 at 1:48 PM

Poem provokes curiousity. I immediately thought, "Is Ink a singer?". Now I realize it's not about singing. It's about deep feelings, and possibly deep hurts. Thank you for this riddle

Ink Empress

December 5, 2023 at 2:40 AM

Ahh haha thank you hilda, yes it means why perform for the ones that dont hear us or listen? Just like, expressing to sleeping dogs. Thank you so much for your comment.

Mystic Rose Rose

December 3, 2023 at 12:55 PM

I'm sure the stars have no problem following the light of your liquid soul dear friend, stay bright, for all to see ;)

Ink Empress

December 5, 2023 at 2:41 AM

Awwn thank you sweet rose always for your kind support

Deb M

December 3, 2023 at 12:39 PM

Awww IE ….such a delightful deep write from the heart! Just lubberly!! Debx

Ink Empress

December 5, 2023 at 2:41 AM

Awwn thank you debx i always appreciate you my beautiful friend

Andrea Dietrich

December 3, 2023 at 12:21 PM

Very very nice. And deep.

Ink Empress

December 5, 2023 at 2:45 AM

Thank you dear andrea always for your support

Bill Baker

December 3, 2023 at 8:45 AM

Those that are not listening, cannot hear; those that look only at the outside of a person will never know their heart or soul. Brillant Monoku, Ink Empress. A FAV for my list, my dear friend. Thanks for sharing from your heart, the beauty that lies within. A POTD (IMHO). smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Ink Empress

December 5, 2023 at 3:01 AM

Thank you so much bill im so glad this is isnt a potd. Hah. So happy you fave it: grateful for you and saras support always

Silent One

December 3, 2023 at 8:13 AM

No point singing for sleeping star, because they are not listening dear poet... A deep one liner and you are right we have to look beyond the surface to understand someone...

Paula Goldsmith

December 3, 2023 at 7:37 AM

A lovely/creative write. I enjoyed it. Have a wonderful day..................

Sara Kendrick

December 3, 2023 at 7:37 AM

" undress these riddles", good one. Thank you for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Clive Culverhouse

December 3, 2023 at 6:52 AM

Sometimes only a few words are needed, and you pulled something sublime out of the hat here IE

Sotto Poet

December 3, 2023 at 6:04 AM

Impressive in every way, dear Ink, your Monoku is a powerful and profound work of art. Its simplicity amplifies its charm, drawing in readers' emotions and encouraging them to accept love. Blessings

Vijay Pandit

December 3, 2023 at 5:30 AM

Charming, evocative--an invitation to love!

Ink Empress

December 3, 2023 at 5:38 AM

Thank you vijay always for your kind support

Charles Messina

December 3, 2023 at 5:27 AM

So deep and powerful, Ink. Short and lovely...Best wishes in the contest. :) Charlie

Ink Empress

December 3, 2023 at 5:29 AM

Ah thank you so very much charlie i appreciate your support always

Lioness Onpaper

December 3, 2023 at 4:35 AM

I do not sing for sleeping stars~undress these riddles..my soul you'll find…. Papi!!!! Dayum!!! Yesssss!!!! Mmmmmm me toooo cannot put effort on dead fish!!! Motionless storms!!! Soulless bodies!! Heartless morons ????????

Lioness Onpaper

December 3, 2023 at 5:07 AM

Liessss!!! I sing to no such things!!! I never abandon u aeee .., orchestrate??? I sooo messy how to even orchestrate such choir aeee …

Ink Empress

December 3, 2023 at 5:03 AM

Lolol u are too intense papi. Smh. You always sing for sleeping stars leave me alone feeling abandoned so go orchestrate a choir for the sleeping stars

Lioness Onpaper

December 3, 2023 at 4:36 AM

Correction!!!! Heartless idiots!! … yea much better