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I do not sing for sleeping stars~undress these riddles..my soul you'll find

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Terry Miller

Date: 12/11/2023 12:54:00 AM

Wonderful!

Silent One

Date: 12/8/2023 9:35:00 AM

Deep one liber...congratulations on your placement in the contest

Ink Empress
Date: 12/8/2023 9:55:00 AM

Thank you so very much

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 12/7/2023 1:00:00 PM

So mesmerizing and evocative, congratulations!

Ink Empress
Date: 12/8/2023 9:55:00 AM

Ah thank you so very much kind soul

Di11y Da11y

Date: 12/7/2023 12:33:00 PM

Beautiful title and word choices. Congratulations on your placement x

Ink Empress
Date: 12/8/2023 9:54:00 AM

Thank you! Im grateful to be placed . Was just a thought, thought might fir your contest ..

Tonye George

Date: 12/5/2023 12:45:00 PM

There's no point singing for mannequins, they do not listen to rhythms. Nicely written!

Ink Empress
Date: 12/6/2023 9:01:00 PM

Exactly you’ve understood my words, thank you for your thoughtful comment grateful for your support

Charles Messina

Date: 12/5/2023 4:39:00 AM

Let the sleepers sleep...save the song for open ears. I hear you, Ink! Loud and clear (lol) Nice!

Ink Empress
Date: 12/6/2023 9:01:00 PM

Haha i love that sleepers sleep yes, absolutely. Thank you for hearing me i appreciate your support always dear charles

Yann Rolland

Date: 12/4/2023 2:12:00 AM

difficult to translate this one, but it sounds pure and musical and deep , enjoyed yann

Ink Empress
Date: 12/5/2023 2:39:00 AM

Awn thank you for commenting although it is difficult to decipher. Always grateful for your kind support

Paige Hind

Date: 12/3/2023 6:49:00 PM

How beautiful to be 'found' by someone, by what remains said, and unsaid...

Ink Empress
Date: 12/5/2023 2:40:00 AM

Awwn thank you always for your support not everyone sees us as we are its special when they do. Thank you for seeing me as i am too

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 12/3/2023 1:48:00 PM

Poem provokes curiousity. I immediately thought, "Is Ink a singer?". Now I realize it's not about singing. It's about deep feelings, and possibly deep hurts. Thank you for this riddle

Ink Empress
Date: 12/5/2023 2:40:00 AM

Ahh haha thank you hilda, yes it means why perform for the ones that dont hear us or listen? Just like, expressing to sleeping dogs. Thank you so much for your comment.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 12/3/2023 12:55:00 PM

I'm sure the stars have no problem following the light of your liquid soul dear friend, stay bright, for all to see ;)

Ink Empress
Date: 12/5/2023 2:41:00 AM

Awwn thank you sweet rose always for your kind support

Deb M

Date: 12/3/2023 12:39:00 PM

Awww IE ….such a delightful deep write from the heart! Just lubberly!! Debx

Ink Empress
Date: 12/5/2023 2:41:00 AM

Awwn thank you debx i always appreciate you my beautiful friend

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/3/2023 12:21:00 PM

Very very nice. And deep.

Ink Empress
Date: 12/5/2023 2:45:00 AM

Thank you dear andrea always for your support

Tom Woody

Date: 12/3/2023 12:03:00 PM

I'm game. I've already got you figured out O Inkish One. Someday ... Nice mono

Ink Empress
Date: 12/5/2023 2:47:00 AM

Haha thank you tomszy appreciate your support

Bill Baker

Date: 12/3/2023 8:45:00 AM

Those that are not listening, cannot hear; those that look only at the outside of a person will never know their heart or soul. Brillant Monoku, Ink Empress. A FAV for my list, my dear friend. Thanks for sharing from your heart, the beauty that lies within. A POTD (IMHO). smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Ink Empress
Date: 12/5/2023 3:01:00 AM

Thank you so much bill im so glad this is isnt a potd. Hah. So happy you fave it: grateful for you and saras support always

Silent One

Date: 12/3/2023 8:13:00 AM

No point singing for sleeping star, because they are not listening dear poet... A deep one liner and you are right we have to look beyond the surface to understand someone...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/3/2023 7:37:00 AM

" undress these riddles", good one. Thank you for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/3/2023 7:37:00 AM

A lovely/creative write. I enjoyed it. Have a wonderful day..................

Clive Culverhouse

Date: 12/3/2023 6:52:00 AM

Sometimes only a few words are needed, and you pulled something sublime out of the hat here IE

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/3/2023 6:04:00 AM

Impressive in every way, dear Ink, your Monoku is a powerful and profound work of art. Its simplicity amplifies its charm, drawing in readers' emotions and encouraging them to accept love. Blessings

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/3/2023 5:30:00 AM

Charming, evocative--an invitation to love!

Ink Empress
Date: 12/3/2023 5:38:00 AM

Thank you vijay always for your kind support

Charles Messina

Date: 12/3/2023 5:27:00 AM

So deep and powerful, Ink. Short and lovely...Best wishes in the contest. :) Charlie

Ink Empress
Date: 12/3/2023 5:29:00 AM

Ah thank you so very much charlie i appreciate your support always

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/3/2023 5:00:00 AM

magnificent Monoku, Ink! Although it's short, it's powerful and deep. I loved "undress these riddles." You amaze me with your ability to writing meaningful poems whether short or long. Outstanding, dearest Ink! Have a pleasant day, hugs, Sara

Ink Empress
Date: 12/3/2023 5:03:00 AM

Ahhh beautiful sara i appreciate you always so much thank you so very much. For your kind and mindful comments always

Lioness Onpaper

Date: 12/3/2023 4:35:00 AM

I do not sing for sleeping stars~undress these riddles..my soul you'll find…. Papi!!!! Dayum!!! Yesssss!!!! Mmmmmm me toooo cannot put effort on dead fish!!! Motionless storms!!! Soulless bodies!! Heartless morons ????????

Tom Woody
Date: 12/3/2023 12:04:00 PM

Sleeping star singer!

Lioness Onpaper
Date: 12/3/2023 5:07:00 AM

Liessss!!! I sing to no such things!!! I never abandon u aeee .., orchestrate??? I sooo messy how to even orchestrate such choir aeee …

Ink Empress
Date: 12/3/2023 5:03:00 AM

Lolol u are too intense papi. Smh. You always sing for sleeping stars leave me alone feeling abandoned so go orchestrate a choir for the sleeping stars

Lioness Onpaper
Date: 12/3/2023 4:36:00 AM

Correction!!!! Heartless idiots!! … yea much better

The Aura Rhymes

Date: 12/3/2023 4:10:00 AM

I’m surprised to see you write such a short poem . However it’s deep and beautiful as always

Ink Empress
Date: 12/3/2023 5:02:00 AM

Hahah you are cute dahlin thank u so much