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Undoubtful Doubt

Could it be That we will never be? It cannot be That we played with fire Without playing the lyre Could it be That you are a liar? Ready to jump into the pyre My heart does bleed And plead For Mercy I am Capricious Even Luscious In your bed Always coloured red Yet You abutted Never Pretentious I am Anxious Could it be That you do not agree? With my Faith What would become of me Should you let me be? Without my Side You will truly Hide Your eternal Pain In Vain.
Written in 2011 This is my first poem on PS. I started with this one. I love it as it made of me a poet, appreciated by a poetry community. Though now, I have learnt to love myself as well as the skies. Love can be about understanding and patience rather than despair.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/29/2016 10:13:00 AM
Anoucheka, you carried a lovely flow and rhyme pattern...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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Date: 12/24/2015 3:15:00 AM
A very unique pattern your poem has, Anoucheka! Congrats for your placement in the contest! ;-)
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Date: 12/24/2015 2:23:00 AM
NICE
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Date: 10/10/2013 5:19:00 PM
A G., , love the double impact winning poem... xox~ Linda
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Date: 10/5/2013 8:41:00 PM
super win......... love ~SKAT~
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Date: 7/29/2012 10:07:00 PM
A G, still congratulating all my sisters past contest. . Now I'm on the poets favorite poem contest.. I'm actually amazed with all these poems. I see why they are chosen as a favorite poem by other poets...a Super Congratulations here. I think I agreed with all the winners in this contest... love~PD
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Date: 7/26/2012 1:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in SKAT's "Members Favorite Poem" contest Anoucheka. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/26/2012 5:02:00 AM
Anoucheka a belated congrats on your win..David
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Date: 7/25/2012 7:37:00 PM
Awesome, Anoucheka. Excellent. Nice going. Kudos. Ralph
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Date: 7/25/2012 10:24:00 AM
Congrats on your win Anoucheka
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Date: 12/2/2011 10:25:00 AM
Undoubtfully Doubt, is pretty much doubt, Anoucheka. Smile. Quite the unique and cute write, ....Congratulations on your worthy poem 2nt place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/1/2011 8:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the Letdown contest Anoucheka
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Date: 12/1/2011 6:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest Anoucheka. You all left a piece of yourselves on this contest page. It was so very hard to judge. I am asking you all to read and comment on all the winners here. You will go away seeing into the hearts of all the winners. This was a very emotional contest for me. Thank you all for supporting this contest. Love and blessing to you all, Carol
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Date: 10/24/2011 2:08:00 PM
Congrats on featured poem this week on PS.. a wonderful write to share luv...
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Date: 10/21/2011 6:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Anoucheka
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Date: 10/21/2011 5:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Anoucheka. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/11/2011 11:46:00 AM
Congrats on your featured poem! Intense and a lot going on there...very well done, Ed
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Date: 8/30/2011 9:14:00 PM
It is wonderful entry but Please give once over to your poem and check the details of the contest that requires less than 10 lines, Anoucheka
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 8/31/2011 12:11:00 AM
Thanks, actually it is my first....can i put it for another contest??
Date: 8/30/2011 1:39:00 PM
It is a beautiful day the sun shining and birds singing. I am reading your wonderful poetry and thinking what could be better then this. Thank you for sharing your poetry Anoucheka. I will be back another time to read more. Love, Carol
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 8/31/2011 12:11:00 AM
Thank you for appreciating :)

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