Anoucheka Gangabissoon Poet Dramatic Monologue

Undoubtful Doubt

Could it be
That we will never be?
It cannot be
That we played with fire
Without playing the lyre
Could it be
That you are a liar?
Ready to jump into the pyre
My heart does bleed
And plead
For Mercy
I am Capricious
Even Luscious
In your bed
Always coloured red
Yet
You abutted
Never Pretentious
I am Anxious
Could it be
That you do not agree?
With my Faith
What would become of me
Should you let me be?
Without my Side
You will truly Hide
Your eternal Pain
In Vain.

Written in 2011
This is my first poem on PS.  I started with this one.  I love it as it made of me a poet, appreciated by a poetry community.  Though now, I have learnt to love myself as well as the skies.  Love can be about understanding and patience rather than despair.

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Beautiful Scars August 29, 2016 at 10:13 AM Anoucheka, you carried a lovely flow and rhyme pattern...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo

Teddy Kimathi December 24, 2015 at 3:15 AM A very unique pattern your poem has, Anoucheka! Congrats for your placement in the contest! ;-)

Skat A December 24, 2015 at 2:23 AM NICE

Poet Destroyer A October 10, 2013 at 5:19 PM A G., , love the double impact winning poem... xox~ Linda

Skat A October 5, 2013 at 8:41 PM super win......... love ~SKAT~

Poet Destroyer A July 29, 2012 at 10:07 PM A G, still congratulating all my sisters past contest. . Now I'm on the poets favorite poem contest.. I'm actually amazed with all these poems. I see why they are chosen as a favorite poem by other poets...a Super Congratulations here. I think I agreed with all the winners in this contest... love~PD

Carol Sunshine Brown July 26, 2012 at 1:13 PM Congratulations on your win in SKAT's "Members Favorite Poem" contest Anoucheka. Love, Carol

David Williams July 26, 2012 at 5:02 AM Anoucheka a belated congrats on your win..David

Ralph Taylor July 25, 2012 at 7:37 PM Awesome, Anoucheka. Excellent. Nice going. Kudos. Ralph

Jonas L. Rozario July 25, 2012 at 10:24 AM Congrats on your win Anoucheka

John Freeman December 2, 2011 at 10:25 AM Undoubtfully Doubt, is pretty much doubt, Anoucheka. Smile. Quite the unique and cute write, ....Congratulations on your worthy poem 2nt place. Agape, Moses

Bob Quigley December 1, 2011 at 8:09 AM Congratulations on your win in the Letdown contest Anoucheka

Carol Sunshine Brown December 1, 2011 at 6:41 AM Congratulations on your placement in my contest Anoucheka. You all left a piece of yourselves on this contest page. It was so very hard to judge. I am asking you all to read and comment on all the winners here. You will go away seeing into the hearts of all the winners. This was a very emotional contest for me. Thank you all for supporting this contest. Love and blessing to you all, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 24, 2011 at 2:08 PM Congrats on featured poem this week on PS.. a wonderful write to share luv...

Dr.Ram Mehta October 21, 2011 at 6:21 PM Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Anoucheka

Carol Sunshine Brown October 21, 2011 at 5:38 AM Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Anoucheka. Love, Carol

Edward Ebbs October 11, 2011 at 11:46 AM Congrats on your featured poem! Intense and a lot going on there...very well done, Ed

Dr.Ram Mehta August 30, 2011 at 9:14 PM It is wonderful entry but Please give once over to your poem and check the details of the contest that requires less than 10 lines, Anoucheka Anoucheka Gangabissoon August 31, 2011 at 12:11 AM Thanks, actually it is my first....can i put it for another contest??

Carol Sunshine Brown August 30, 2011 at 1:39 PM It is a beautiful day the sun shining and birds singing. I am reading your wonderful poetry and thinking what could be better then this. Thank you for sharing your poetry Anoucheka. I will be back another time to read more. Love, Carol Anoucheka Gangabissoon August 31, 2011 at 12:11 AM Thank you for appreciating :)