Undone

“The only correct actions are those that demand no explanation and no apology”                       Red Auerbach

On my fridge I have a list of all the things I need to do.
Today I put up a list of all the things that need to be undone.
Stick around and I will explain my second list to you.
The beginning seems best to start, so here is number one.

When we argue I always refer to your family as being the fault.
Now I will rescind all those unkind words admitting I was wrong.
And your family who have done no wrong I will gladly exalt.
For all the times you disciplined the kids, and I did not go along.

Making me the good guy and you the mean one, I wasn’t fair. 
I will talk to the kids, let them know I was wrong and mend my ways.
All the great meals you make and I eat by the TV in my easy chair.
From now on we all eat at the table and that’s the way it stays.

In two golf clubs now, I am gone nearly all weekend playing.
I hardly get to see you and the kids Its time to for me to choose one.
Its expensive, so from now on, with you and the kids I’ll be staying.
I don’t need to be in two clubs so membership at one gets undone. 

My list is short but I am sure I can find things to grow it.
And you will be pleased when you see things around here improve.
I love you darlin and from now on I am going to show it.
Maybe I can even attack the to do list to and really get on the move.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 3/3/2024 4:54:00 AM
Love this :) God bless you, love, Gina
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Date: 2/11/2024 7:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful piece, Merv:-) Enjoyed.
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Date: 2/25/2024 3:47:00 AM
Thanks so Much Edward.
Date: 2/8/2024 10:05:00 PM
I love this poem my darlin Merv. So long as you aren't "undoing" things so you can do them back up again "like the toaster" You did so well with poem.
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Date: 2/25/2024 3:49:00 AM
OK I will get to the to do list soon. OK the toaster was no good anyway and you already bought a new one. Stop bringing it up.
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