Undone

this day unraveled its little threads as it came undone at the seams

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Running Wolves

Date: 1/15/2020 9:21:00 AM

Sounds like a normal day for me... Nice brevity

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/15/2020 10:18:00 AM

thanks...it was one of those days...

Jeff Connelly

Date: 1/14/2020 4:45:00 PM

A very interesting way to start the day Sandra. I would quickly staple it before the stuffing comes out.

Jeff Connelly
Date: 1/15/2020 8:14:00 AM

HAPPINESS!!! Seek and you will find. Leave the rubbish behind Sandra.

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/14/2020 7:23:00 PM

lol...too late... tomorrow is a new day... last night the stitches came undone... today a glass was shattered... who knows what tomorrow will bring...

Chris Green

Date: 1/14/2020 7:25:00 AM

Some days are like that it seems...I have had many of them lately but it will get better, I know it will. Today is a new day, start it with a smile and let happiness lead you on your way. Beautifully written Sandy and one I and many others can relate to.

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/14/2020 7:22:00 PM

Thank you Chris... we all have those days we wish we would have stayed home on...or in bed and slept them away...

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/14/2020 12:06:00 AM

the world today needs many seamstress, Sandra. and with poetry like this, its just found one....

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/14/2020 7:17:00 PM

Thank you so much Harry...yesterday was one of those days where my muse was hidden behind the events and had little to say...except this which worked... hopefully tomorrow i will get that needle out... hugs