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Understanding Poetry

A poem is more,
Than rhythm and rhyme.
The words must have balance,
With tempo and time.

Free Verse is like that,
The words have a blend,
That helps it to flow,
From beginning to end;

Sometimes like honey,
From a sweet honey tree,
Sometimes like a river,
As it flows to the sea;

But there's always a message,
Or a story that's told.
The words can be sweet,
Or compelling and bold.

A poet's an artist,
Painting pictures with words,
Bringing out music,
Your ears haven't heard;

A music that comes,
From down deep in your soul.
It makes one feel free,
It makes one feel whole.

To be able to write,
Words that reach out and touch,
Something special inside you,
And bringing out much,

Of the feelings inside you,
That we often hide;
Often revealing things,
So deep inside,

Even you did not know,
Were hiding in there;
But the words shine a light,
On beliefs and on cares;

So when you read a poem,
Don't just read words on paper.
You must feel them and taste them,
For words have a flavor.

Sometimes it's bitter,
And sometimes it's sweet;
But if you taste it,
It's always a treat;

For a poet shows more,
Than the stories he's told,
When he shows you his poems,
He shows you his soul.
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Gauthier Avatar
March 30, 2021 at 12:34 PM
Beautiful POTD, Judy ~ bravo
Wolf Avatar
March 29, 2021 at 9:03 PM
I see that P.S. FAVEd this one too, Judy. Richly deserved! Kudos! :) gw
Michael Avatar
March 29, 2021 at 9:54 AM
Flowing like a waterfall...Congratulations Judy Ball on POTD.
Summers Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 6:10 AM
I missed this one, congratulations on POTD honors. John
Ball Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 8:07 AM
Thanks so much J. God Bless, JB
Fenn Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 9:30 PM
Wow Judy! You are so right! Well put!
Ball Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 8:17 AM
Thanks bunches Jennifer. God Bless, JB
Nicole Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 8:07 PM
"Don't just read words on paper, you must feel them" I completely agree. Emotions within, are just waiting to be felt. This is beautiful and tender, all at the same time. Congratulations Judy, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy
Ball Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 8:22 AM
Thanks so much Brandy. God Bless, JB
Romios Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 7:47 PM
Well done quatrain, Judy. Congratulations. Yahoo!, KUDOS. HUGS, PANGIE XX
Ball Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 8:24 AM
Thank you so much Pangie. God Bless, JB
Rodrigues Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 6:58 PM
Congrats on POTD!
Ball Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 7:03 PM
Thanks bunches Kim. God Bless, JB
Koplin Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 5:04 PM
I absolutely just love this Judy! Well done and congratulations on your honor of potd!!
Ball Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 6:58 PM
Thank you so much Mark. God Bless, JB
Edmonds  Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 5:02 PM
Judy, this poem is something wonderful, the words have meaning, they rhyme and flow with poetic sway and truly deserve the honour of poem of the day... Belle
Ball Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 7:01 PM
Thanks so much Belle. God Bless, JB
La France Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 4:55 PM
Judy, congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE DAY with your wonderful poem _Constance
Ball Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 7:04 PM
Thanks bunches Constance. God Bless, JB
Roper Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 2:57 PM
Congratulations, Judy, on POTD with this true verse. Hugs eve
Ball Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 7:06 PM
Thanks so much Eve. God Bless, JB
Wolf Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 11:40 AM
Now it's a P.S. FAVE too! Like I said, best explanation of what great poetry is that I've ever read! Congrats on POTD, Judy! Cheers, Gershon
Ball Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 7:09 PM
Thanks so much Gershon. God Bless, JB
Kauffman Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 11:05 AM
So very true, Judy. Congratulations on your POTD.
Ball Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 7:12 PM
Thanks so much Sam. God Bless, JB
May Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 10:04 AM
Great write Judy, Congrats on POTD..
Ball Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 8:26 AM
Thanks so much Joseph. God Bless, JB
Rone Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 9:29 AM
Wwwwwonderful! "Sometimes like a river, As it flows to the sea;" This is a superb effort. Congratulations.
Ball Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 8:29 AM
Thanks so much Ken. God Bless, JB
Hankins Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 9:20 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Judy!
Ball Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 8:42 AM
Thanks bunches Milton. God Bless, JB
Y. Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 8:09 AM
Hi Judy, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis
Ball Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 8:39 AM
Thanks bunches Alexis. God Bless, JB
Goldsmith Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 7:54 AM
Congratulations on your P.o.t.d win. A A "Wonderful" Write. So True. Love you last line, "When he shows you his poems, He shows you his soul." Very true and you did. Have a blessed day/weekend.............
Ball Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 8:44 AM
Thanks so much Paula. God Bless, JB
Fowler Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 7:53 AM
A lovely sensuous poem Judy. I love each word. Terrific rhyming, terrific form, terrific rhythm. :) Linda
Ball Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 8:42 AM
Thanks bunches Linda. God Bless, JB
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March 26, 2021 at 7:02 AM
Congratulations Judy on Potd, you really put all the human senses into this write, exactly what poetry is all about, cheers David
Ball Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 7:41 AM
Thank you so much David. God Bless, JB
Merryman Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 6:06 AM
I think you covered it all, Judy! Seeing, feeling, hearing, tasting, touching! Congrats on your well deserved POTD! Blessings, Kim M
Ball Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 6:24 AM
Thank you so much Kim. God Bless, JB
Pandit Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 6:00 AM
Back with congrats on poem of the day, Judy. Well done.
Ball Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 6:05 AM
Oooo! Thanks bunches Vijay. God Bless, JB
Andresen Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 5:59 AM
- You said it so right, Judy ... congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ball Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 6:30 AM
Thanks bunches Anne-Lise. God Bless, JB
Mcconnell Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 5:00 AM
Great poetry pen Judy, you Sum it up so very well showing nice rhyme and flow along with good imagery and insightfulness. Congrats on the POTD! Blessings always,Gordon
Ball Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 6:34 AM
Thanks so much Gordon. Hope all is well with you. God Bless, JB
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