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Understandable Attraction

From a small accident I didn't foresee Again, I see dirt all over me It's no new alert I'm older than dirt So that's why it's attracted to me!

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Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 10/31/2017 7:46:00 PM

I think a lot of us baby boomers can relate to this funny write Pat! Fun and clever one!~Che :)

Pat Adams
Date: 11/1/2017 6:47:00 PM

Actually you don't seem like a baby boomer to me you seem like a youngster! I guess we're young at heart!!.......Pat

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 10/31/2017 9:19:00 AM

Lol! This dirty girl's got no such excuse ;p Love this! xomo

Pat Adams
Date: 10/31/2017 3:43:00 PM

Hey! That was a reason!!! (Actually I'm not sure that's better).....80(......Oh well!........80)

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 10/31/2017 8:43:00 AM

:-) I can relate!

Pat Adams
Date: 10/31/2017 3:37:00 PM

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