Underneath the Ivy

Where does the green and grey path travel to
Laden with the hushed love and numbing pain
The dark sky descends to join the weird blue
Whispering in the ears of deep breath lane

Does it lead to the concealed yet green grace
Beneath headstones of the bones in silence
Can you listen my dear pale green Cypress
Can we look just once through your mystic lens

Stark lone tombstones surrounded by close vine
Rare footfalls with the boquets of love breath
For blue shades that once dwelt in now still mind
Now reduced to nothingness underneath

Rest in peace, when the leave bird will call me
Underneath the ivy I will join thee
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3/10/2016
For the contest Overgrown with Vines 
Sponsored by Broken Wings
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kendrick Avatar
October 14, 2016 at 11:44 AM
Good work on the winners' list..Way to go..It is a certain tone to it that is inviting..Congrats on your win..Sara
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October 14, 2016 at 11:17 PM
Thank you ...
Wolf Avatar
October 12, 2016 at 5:37 AM
Now that's a sonnet. Loved it immensely /|\
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October 12, 2016 at 6:04 AM
Thank you ...
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October 11, 2016 at 3:22 PM
Very nice writing-and thank you for your comment-Gordon-California blue-
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October 12, 2016 at 6:04 AM
Thank you ...
La France Avatar
October 10, 2016 at 10:17 AM
Probir, congratulations on your win in my contest ~
Gupta Avatar
October 10, 2016 at 9:33 PM
Thank you so much, BW ...
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October 9, 2016 at 5:38 PM
Congrats on your win. Great sonnet.
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October 9, 2016 at 9:18 PM
Thank you ...
Scars Avatar
October 9, 2016 at 11:31 AM
oh Probir! wow the last line of this sonnet is creepy and deep! I love this one :) congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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October 9, 2016 at 9:18 PM
Thank you ...
Smith Avatar
October 4, 2016 at 10:53 AM
Well done friend Probir, good luck in the contest...
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October 4, 2016 at 12:30 PM
Thank you , Charlie ...
Turner Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 5:18 PM
Probir, this is another beautiful sonnet from your pen. This is fantastic. Good luck.
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October 4, 2016 at 12:08 AM
Thank you for the appreciation, Daniel ...
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October 3, 2016 at 10:47 AM
Peaceful poetry that embraces the lot of Man with beauty and grace dear, Probir! A seven!
Gupta Avatar
October 3, 2016 at 12:25 PM
Very nicely said, Demetrios ... Exactly so ...
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