Underloved

It's early morning,
And I'm in silence without noise;
Some thoughts wander, I can't reach them,
They were eager to see dawn.

My porch's sagging, rain is present,
You may be somewhere alone.
And raindrops are falling from my ceiling,
Like a hysterical rugged drum.

And here I am,
Unrested and watching;
This sunk heart,
Lonesome in love.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Krutsinger Avatar
March 11, 2021 at 10:53 PM
Ahhh So prettily written. I think an angel is smiling as she reads this "Lonesome in love."
Alexandru Avatar
December 16, 2020 at 9:52 AM
a great tribute to your mom, nicely written
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