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Underhog

Underhog

Could you support the awful Hog
Could take his awful part magog
pig so beguiling

Could  overlook the stinking slob
keep him in the bedroom, with Bob
pig still is smiling

Don Johnson 1-aug-11

Dr.Ram Mehta
Contest Name	Tail-Rhyme Contest

Copyright © Don Johnson | Year Posted 2011

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 8/8/2011 4:37:00 PM Congratulations on your placement in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Tail-Rhyme" contest Don. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 8/7/2011 10:12:00 AM Congratulations Don on your win in Dr.Mehta's contest.Enjoyed your poem. Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 8/7/2011 6:49:00 AM there you go, don.. sweet congrats! :) huggs! Login to Reply

Mike Dailey Date: 8/6/2011 9:04:00 PM Another nice one Don - congratulations on the placement in this contest. Mike Login to Reply

Jun-Jun Villanueva Date: 8/6/2011 9:49:00 AM CONGRATULATIONS~~~~~really terrific~~~~smile~~~~*-*junjun Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 8/6/2011 12:59:00 AM Congrats DON on a stupendous win with this fascinating poetry .. excellent choice for new form usage.. missing Zorro..luv.. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/5/2011 9:22:00 PM a good fun smiling poem! congrats on your win,Don. Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 8/5/2011 9:11:00 PM Congratulations on your top ten win. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 8/5/2011 5:14:00 PM Congratulations on the win in my contest, Don Login to Reply

Francine Roberts Date: 8/1/2011 11:55:00 PM cool entry for the contest, check syllable count in line 4 , I come up with 9 Login to Reply Francine Roberts Date: 8/2/2011 10:28:00 AM perfect now

Judy Ball Date: 8/1/2011 11:55:00 PM This is great Don. Love it. Come to think of it I've cuddled a piggy or two. Smiles and Good Luck. God Bless, JB Login to Reply

Elizabeth Wesley Date: 8/1/2011 8:16:00 PM Hey Don, you are out on a limb with this funny verse. Good luck in the contest. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 8/1/2011 11:27:00 AM well leave it to the DON of PS to create poetry magic .. cool and clever sweets...good luck in the contest... my s.m. is NOT working so cannot retrieve it or ansser u luv..sory..oh....oh.... Login to Reply Don Johnson Date: 8/1/2011 7:18:00 PM Never mind baby doll, santa claus is still on hols. catch you maybe later, sweet potater...on

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 8/1/2011 11:06:00 AM Thanks for the entry , Don Login to Reply Don Johnson Date: 8/1/2011 7:17:00 PM Thanks for the possible entry place, Dr Ram

Jun-Jun Villanueva Date: 8/1/2011 6:41:00 AM goodluck for the contest...~~~~smile~~~~*-*junjun Login to Reply