Underhog

Underhog Could you support the awful Hog Could take his awful part magog pig so beguiling Could overlook the stinking slob keep him in the bedroom, with Bob pig still is smiling Don Johnson 1-aug-11 Dr.Ram Mehta Contest Name Tail-Rhyme Contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/8/2011 4:37:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Tail-Rhyme" contest Don. Love, Carol

Kash Poet

Date: 8/7/2011 10:12:00 AM

Congratulations Don on your win in Dr.Mehta's contest.Enjoyed your poem.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/7/2011 6:49:00 AM

there you go, don.. sweet congrats! :) huggs!

Mike Dailey

Date: 8/6/2011 9:04:00 PM

Another nice one Don - congratulations on the placement in this contest. Mike

Jun-Jun Villanueva

Date: 8/6/2011 9:49:00 AM

CONGRATULATIONS~~~~~really terrific~~~~smile~~~~*-*junjun

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/6/2011 12:59:00 AM

Congrats DON on a stupendous win with this fascinating poetry .. excellent choice for new form usage.. missing Zorro..luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/5/2011 9:22:00 PM

a good fun smiling poem! congrats on your win,Don.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/5/2011 9:11:00 PM

Congratulations on your top ten win. Love, Joyce

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/5/2011 5:14:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in my contest, Don

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/1/2011 11:55:00 PM

cool entry for the contest, check syllable count in line 4 , I come up with 9

Francine Roberts
Date: 8/2/2011 10:28:00 AM

perfect now

Judy Ball

Date: 8/1/2011 11:55:00 PM

This is great Don. Love it. Come to think of it I've cuddled a piggy or two. Smiles and Good Luck. God Bless, JB

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/1/2011 8:16:00 PM

Hey Don, you are out on a limb with this funny verse. Good luck in the contest.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/1/2011 11:27:00 AM

well leave it to the DON of PS to create poetry magic .. cool and clever sweets...good luck in the contest... my s.m. is NOT working so cannot retrieve it or ansser u luv..sory..oh....oh....

Don Johnson
Date: 8/1/2011 7:18:00 PM

Never mind baby doll, santa claus is still on hols. catch you maybe later, sweet potater...on

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/1/2011 11:06:00 AM

Thanks for the entry , Don

Don Johnson
Date: 8/1/2011 7:17:00 PM

Thanks for the possible entry place, Dr Ram

Jun-Jun Villanueva

Date: 8/1/2011 6:41:00 AM

goodluck for the contest...~~~~smile~~~~*-*junjun