Under This Red Umbrella

UNDER THIS RED UMBRELLA The rain did not stop us romantically. Our love was to be enjoyed. Life span was our imagery. We are young adults in love. We walked in an embrace. We talked about family and friends. We were unity of togetherness in this scene. I looked away shortly and saw others doing the same. That momentary endeavor drew his attention as well. He leaned forward with protection so that I would not get wet. This red umbrella glisten from the night lights as we stroll through the park. The tree leaves were wet; this was autumn. Good spirits were in optimistic to longevity. The red umbrella reflects the leaves of the trees as it does my man’s adoration of me. Under this red umbrella are images of love! _____________________________________| User Name: Verlena S. Walker – Nom De Plume: Oblivion Dark Sunshine Sponsor: Leonora Galinta Personification of Lovers done for Poem with a theme of "Umbrella" Free Poetry Contest Entry Date: March 22, 2014
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Merryman Avatar
April 4, 2014 at 9:20 PM
Verlena, congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Walker  Avatar
April 4, 2014 at 11:30 PM
thanks kim... verlena
Kendrick Avatar
April 4, 2014 at 3:52 PM
Congrats on this winning work..Way to go.Sara
Walker  Avatar
April 4, 2014 at 11:30 PM
thanks sara. verlena
A  Avatar
April 3, 2014 at 10:29 PM
VERLENA, congrats on your AWESOME win. .. Luv ~SKAT~
Walker  Avatar
April 3, 2014 at 10:31 PM
Thanks Skat... Verlena
Mehta Avatar
April 3, 2014 at 5:04 AM
My congratulations for writing this lovely poem, enjoyed it, verlena
Walker  Avatar
April 3, 2014 at 10:31 PM
Thanks Dr. Ram... Verlena
A   Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 11:48 PM
Verlena, Congratulations, the poem is awesome. Enjoyed your winning poem. GOOD NIGHT, luv LINDA
Walker  Avatar
April 3, 2014 at 12:16 AM
Thanks Linda... Verlena
Gorelick Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 4:05 PM
Sweet! Good job and congrats. I would have placed it higher. BG
Walker  Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 4:38 PM
Thanks Barbara for your real support... Verlena
Andresen Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 11:21 AM
- Hey Verlena - Congratulations on your win in "Umbrella" contest Sponsor Leonora Galinta - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Walker  Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 12:34 PM
Thanks Anne. Verlena
Gasun Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 10:59 AM
My warm and hearty congratulations on this brilliant piece and win my dear friend Verlena! Thank u so much for your loving support. More blessings! Biggest hugs! Love lots always, Leonora
Walker  Avatar
April 2, 2014 at 12:35 PM
Thanks Leonora. Verlena
Davis Avatar
March 24, 2014 at 8:40 AM
Verlena Such a passionate and romantic write. Full of heart. love and sincerity. Thanks for the great comment on my Racism poem.
Walker  Avatar
March 24, 2014 at 9:46 AM
Thanks Robin... Verlena
Raina Avatar
March 8, 2014 at 2:09 PM
damn romantic! good job! :)
Walker  Avatar
March 8, 2014 at 2:22 PM
Thanks for the thumbs up and please visit me again soon... I appreciate your comments... :)s Verlena
Yassin Avatar
February 22, 2014 at 7:51 AM
(Red umbrella) very romantic and sweet you- made the love survive through the season of cold
Walker  Avatar
February 25, 2014 at 2:34 AM
Thanks Saliam... Love last in warmth... :) Verlena - Oblivion Dark Sunshine
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