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Under This Cold Gaze

The connections
are tenuous, even the important ones.
The fragility mostly goes unnoticed 
until something breaks.
Structures though give a sense
of permanence and become beacons
that promise safe passage.

But this is a facade, a brief lull
in the chaos that measures out
a life and then, beyond,
the numbing timescale 
driving everything further
and further apart.

And yet,
even under this cold gaze,
there are moments that seem
to come from elsewhere,
something reaching through
to ignite the ordinary,
as when, today at dawn,
a tree released its treasure
of noisy birds and a lovely face
carried the grace of first light
into the still morning.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




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Date: 9/8/2022 7:43:00 PM
This is good, and also reminds me a lot of another poet on the site, Eric Ashford. Y’all have similar styles, which is just fine by me!
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Paul Willason
Date: 9/9/2022 6:54:00 PM
Thanks Jeff for yr comments. New to the site and finding my way around. Will check out Eric's work. Regards

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