Kelly Deschler Poet Quatrain

Under the Weather

Under the weather
and feeling fine
awashed in gray
a shade divine

As just above me
the thunder roll
showers drip through
the umbrella hole

Lightning finds me
to fall then crash
and with a wind
the rain now lash

Misses their feet
and drenches mine
under the weather
and feeling fine

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Arturo Michael June 27, 2019 at 7:19 AM You've got something special in your ink... Kelly Deschler July 21, 2019 at 9:16 PM Thank you so very much :)

Jim Joyce August 2, 2018 at 12:25 PM your poems tell wonderful stories..great write Kelly Deschler February 3, 2019 at 9:22 PM Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poems once again Jim ... So glad you are enjoying them :)

M. L. Kiser July 9, 2018 at 12:26 PM A bright spot of poetry for anyone who feels, "under the weather". Great job. Kelly Deschler October 27, 2018 at 12:47 PM Thanks so much for reading M.L. :)

Honestly J.T. July 3, 2018 at 11:53 PM Nice job -JT Kelly Deschler October 27, 2018 at 12:42 PM Thank you for reading JT :)

Lyric Man June 29, 2018 at 5:55 AM Kelly, you are an artist with a pen.. I love your work! Kelly Deschler August 23, 2018 at 1:11 PM Thank you, LM... I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment so kindly on my work :)

Arthur Vaso June 29, 2018 at 1:04 AM I enjoyed this, and it made me think, in this sense we are all "under the weather" :) Kelly Deschler August 23, 2018 at 12:59 PM Thank you Arthur... and yes, the weathers of life are inescapable :)

Ravi Sathasivam June 25, 2018 at 7:58 AM Excellent. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it. Kelly Deschler August 23, 2018 at 12:34 PM Thanks so much for reading!

Mark Peterson June 23, 2018 at 12:04 AM Clever little rhyme. You've attached considerable mirth to this bit of whimsy. Kelly Deschler August 23, 2018 at 12:33 PM Thank you for your kind comments once again Mark ... I just wanted to have a little fun with this poem and hoped it would bring a smile for the reader :)