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Under the Weather

Under the weather and feeling fine awashed in gray a shade divine As just above me the thunder roll showers drip through the umbrella hole Lightning finds me to fall then crash and with a wind the rain now lash Misses their feet and drenches mine under the weather and feeling fine

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Arturo Michael

Date: 6/27/2019 7:19:00 AM

You've got something special in your ink...

Kelly Deschler
Date: 7/21/2019 9:16:00 PM

Thank you so very much :)

Jim Joyce

Date: 8/2/2018 12:25:00 PM

your poems tell wonderful stories..great write

Kelly Deschler
Date: 2/3/2019 9:22:00 PM

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poems once again Jim ... So glad you are enjoying them :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 7/9/2018 12:26:00 PM

A bright spot of poetry for anyone who feels, "under the weather". Great job.

Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/27/2018 12:47:00 PM

Thanks so much for reading M.L. :)

Honestly J.T.

Date: 7/3/2018 11:53:00 PM

Nice job -JT

Kelly Deschler
Date: 10/27/2018 12:42:00 PM

Thank you for reading JT :)

Lyric Man

Date: 6/29/2018 5:55:00 AM

Kelly, you are an artist with a pen.. I love your work!

Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/23/2018 1:11:00 PM

Thank you, LM... I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment so kindly on my work :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/29/2018 1:04:00 AM

I enjoyed this, and it made me think, in this sense we are all "under the weather" :)

Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/23/2018 12:59:00 PM

Thank you Arthur... and yes, the weathers of life are inescapable :)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 6/25/2018 7:58:00 AM

Excellent. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.

Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/23/2018 12:34:00 PM

Thanks so much for reading!

Mark Peterson

Date: 6/23/2018 12:04:00 AM

Clever little rhyme. You've attached considerable mirth to this bit of whimsy.

Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/23/2018 12:33:00 PM

Thank you for your kind comments once again Mark ... I just wanted to have a little fun with this poem and hoped it would bring a smile for the reader :)