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Under the Sunglasses

You can see the love in his eyes
She's not a possession; she's a prize
And as for her,
She happily purrs,
Drunk on Love's fine wine

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Received 6th place in "first love poem on the soup" contest
Received 10th place in "Loveland Limerick" contest

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Patrick Cornwall

April 24, 2012 at 6:52 AM

Congrats on your poem being featured.I enjoyed....Patrick

Carol Sunshine Brown

April 24, 2012 at 5:14 AM

Congratulations on your featured poem this week Susan. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 30, 2011 at 9:14 AM

Congratulations on your win in P. D.'s "first love poem (on the soup)" contest Susan. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

November 28, 2011 at 10:56 PM

I LOVE this one, Susan. One of your best!! Big congrats in the contest

Bob Quigley

November 28, 2011 at 10:41 PM

Very nice write Susan. Congratulations

Poet Destroyer A

November 28, 2011 at 10:03 PM

SUSAN,.. Congratulations on your wonderful win, IN MY "first love poem on the soup" CONTEST* I would also like to thank you for the support. Take care, and have yourself a great night,. ;-) ~p.d.

Sara Kendrick

July 4, 2011 at 8:20 AM

Enjoyed reading this one today..Great work and see that it was a winner...Thanks for stopping by..Sara

James Fraser

May 6, 2011 at 8:52 AM

Many have been drunk on Love's fine wine, oh I wish for too again. Koollio Limerick Susan - have a lovely weekend....:)

Randy Biffany

April 12, 2011 at 10:56 PM

I like this short, sweet poem. I'm sorry you did not like my poem, Mirror, but I certainly appreciate your feedback.

Lisa Cooper

April 12, 2011 at 8:48 AM

Nice limerick you have here. it leaves the reader wondering what comes next.

Dr Hitendra Mehta

April 12, 2011 at 4:59 AM

Many congrats Susan on notching big win in Linda's Contest with this romantic imaginative piece. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Elaine George

April 11, 2011 at 1:51 PM

Wonderful Limerick, Susan. Thank you for sharing. I really struggle with trying to write Limericks. They are much more difficult that they look. Well Done. Lainie

Caryl Muzzey

April 11, 2011 at 9:30 AM

Congratulations on your win with this wonderful write. I enjoyed the read. Caryl

Harry Horsman

April 11, 2011 at 6:32 AM

Like this, Susan, different and a wonderful tribute. Harry

Carol Sunshine Brown

April 11, 2011 at 4:52 AM

Congratulations on your win Susan in Linda-Marie's contest "Loveland Limerick". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

April 10, 2011 at 2:43 PM

This is awesome, Susan. truly I think it is one of the cleverest! Congratulations.

Dr.Ram Mehta

April 10, 2011 at 1:35 PM

Congratulations on the tenth place win in the contest, Susan

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

April 10, 2011 at 11:26 AM

Very nice limerick, & I love your title for this too, as well as your last line for it :) Congrats on your win Susan :)

Joe Maverick

April 10, 2011 at 10:41 AM

warm wishes on the placement today Susan!

John Freeman

April 10, 2011 at 10:31 AM

Good to see your poem in the top 10 Susan, Congratulations on your honored 10th place. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 10, 2011 at 8:09 AM

Congrats Susan on your success in my contest luv.. with this unique and clever entry ..thankxx for supporting my contest .. luv..

Lisa Cooper

April 9, 2011 at 12:26 PM

lovely good luck on the contest

Dana Smith

April 9, 2011 at 12:07 PM

Wonderful read this afternoon. Looking forward to reading more. Take care. Dana'lynn

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