Sara Kendrick Poet Choka

Under the Rose Trellis

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                                             Running Pale Pink Rose
                                       On the trellis grows_ soft scent_
                                               Wafts on morning air

                                                 Under rose trellis
                                       You steal a kiss__Oh! Blissful
                                              Lips that taste of  rose

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Raul Moreno June 3, 2010 at 11:33 PM Wow, nice choka SK...I must certainly favor this one. I loved the title and the context as a whole...Raul

Doris Culverhouse May 13, 2010 at 12:31 PM naughty!! but beautifully romantic work!!

Caroline Cécile Delacroix May 12, 2010 at 10:26 PM Aww, how sweet and charming write, Sara. Loved this choka very much. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your great comments on my poem too. Best wishes, Caroline.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 12, 2010 at 6:35 PM Glad u enjoyed my recent Sestina poem but its not my entry for the contest... just an expression of how I was feeling and dealing with issues of this "romance" today.. appreciate your reading my poetry Sara and for your always uplifting comments too..luv.. Linda-Marie..

James Fraser May 12, 2010 at 1:52 PM Sara, this is quite beautiful. You know i love Roses in poems and this one is just lovely. Have a wonderful evening >> James

Phyllis Babcock May 12, 2010 at 11:59 AM I love roses and to steal a kiss. Nice. God Bless Phyl

Kevin Semeniuk May 12, 2010 at 11:46 AM i like this very much its really beautiful!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 12, 2010 at 8:19 AM Tender and beautiful words Sara and u could just see the trellis in your lines so full of imagery.. enjoyed reading this creative write today..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Gert W. Knop May 12, 2010 at 7:42 AM Lovely romatic Choka, Sara! I once walked through the Sinai Desert and saw also some fata morgans and saw people walking but there was noboby there and when you came closer, they were walking further away. Interesting illusion of hot air! Thank you for your comments and keep your pen flowing...Gert

Carrie Richards May 12, 2010 at 7:01 AM Oh, Sara...this is quite lovely!! Nice!!

Carolyn Devonshire May 12, 2010 at 6:49 AM Uplifting and romantic! How lucky is she who captures a kiss beneath the rose trellis. Very nice image, Sara. Love, Carolyn