Under the Pine

She slips under the green pine.
Her decorations devine,
Tied with a red bow.
Ted - he’s a bit slow.
Her wink scores a shine.

12/5/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Lawless Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 8:04 AM
as they cuddle beneath flashing lights... hoping this is not one of the sights.... to tarnish the eyes.... of pajama clad spies..... creeping into the rest of their nights
Rodrigues Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 12:47 PM
Oh, no! No creeping eyes...lol!
Krutsinger Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 12:57 AM
Ted, let's get with the program, Man!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 12:46 PM
LOL! Right, Caren!
Dietrich Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 5:54 PM
very CUTE. Love this, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 9:03 PM
Thank you, sweet lady! Hugs...Kim
Green Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 2:44 PM
Old Ted...it takes him a bit but he'll eventually get it. :) Fun Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 3:03 PM
LOL!
La France Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 10:21 AM
Kim, cute, now what were those two doing under the pine ??
Rodrigues Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 10:46 AM
Hmm... lol
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