Under the Overpass

I am the man who sits under the overpass.
I'm just a blink when traffic is moving,
but more closely-eyed when cars go by slow.

Some pause in inquiry, wanting to know if I'm okay.
Others pull over and offer help to me,
to which I say,
I am fine.

They drive off bewildered,
pondering their comparative, comfortable lives.

They cannot understand why I do what I do.
To every person in every car that passes by,
I say,
I'm not sitting here for me,
I'm sitting here for you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 4/14/2022 6:53:00 PM
Hi Scott, I enjoyed reading your poem. Unfortunately there are two kinds of people living on this planet. Those who have a conscience and those who don't. For the latter, I have my own thoughts and beliefs with regards to their behaviour. If you are interested, check out my page and poem titled: "Conned." Cheers Anne :-)
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Anne E Sangster - K
Date: 4/20/2022 11:04:00 AM
Thank you Scott. I decided to remove my"Conned" poem. I'm happy to hear you enjoyed "My Favourite Place" and hope you enjoy reading my other poems Cheers Anne :-)
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Scott Campbell
Date: 4/16/2022 2:45:00 PM
Thanks for reading and commenting, Anne. I did read "Conned" and was astounded at the vivid imagery it evoked. I then looked at your poem "My Favourite Place" and was delighted by the complete contrast of imagery in that work. I look forward to reading more of your poetry.
Date: 4/8/2022 10:45:00 AM
Very thought-provoking poem, Scott. I like the message and your delivery through your poetry. Welcome to a lifetime of poetry soup. A poet friend in Texas, Bill I'm following your poetry, check mine out.
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Scott Campbell
Date: 4/8/2022 8:48:00 PM
Thank you, Bill. I appreciate your thoughts on this and the comments on some of my other work/really,play. I have looked at some of your work and am indeed impressed! My intention is to read the rest! We seem to be kindred spirits!
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