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Under the Heaven Stars

Rays of yellow and orange sunlight
           Your eyes beaming with delight
     Strolling hand by hand along the garden
   Where flowers blooms and sweetness blend

         Tucking an orchid behind my ear
         Drawing me so close and so dear
         I smell your musky natural scent
         Twirling and filling me with sense

       Quietly, we sat and had a small talk
           Unminding even, as night falls
             On the grass, we lie down
    Staring up and pointing to heaven stars 

    Under the shadowy gleam of the moon
     There and there, we shared one kiss
    Next to you in a warmth loving cocoon

By
olive_eloi
5:23 pm
03/08/2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 12/4/2014 2:27:00 PM
What a dreamy loving scene you set here Olive with your poetic words. Oh to live such vistas, wow, James :)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/5/2014 6:19:00 AM
:)
Date: 3/10/2014 4:06:00 PM
Nice dear...keep it up...best wishes from India...
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/10/2014 5:30:00 PM
Thanks :) t God always the glory.. :)
Date: 3/9/2014 5:17:00 PM
very romantic...enjoying sunset's beauty and night's allure. // paul
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/10/2014 5:31:00 PM
thanks :) to God be the glory.. :)

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