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UNDER THE HEAVEN STARS

Rays of yellow and orange sunlight Your eyes beaming with delight Strolling hand by hand along the garden Where flowers blooms and sweetness blend Tucking an orchid behind my ear Drawing me so close and so dear I smell your musky natural scent Twirling and filling me with sense Quietly, we sat and had a small talk Unminding even, as night falls On the grass, we lie down Staring up and pointing to heaven stars Under the shadowy gleam of the moon There and there, we shared one kiss Next to you in a warmth loving cocoon By olive_eloi 5:23 pm 03/08/2014

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Date: 12/4/2014 2:27:00 PM
What a dreamy loving scene you set here Olive with your poetic words. Oh to live such vistas, wow, James :)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/5/2014 6:19:00 AM
:)
Date: 3/10/2014 4:06:00 PM
Nice dear...keep it up...best wishes from India...
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/10/2014 5:30:00 PM
Thanks :) t God always the glory.. :)
Date: 3/9/2014 5:17:00 PM
very romantic...enjoying sunset's beauty and night's allure. // paul
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 3/10/2014 5:31:00 PM
thanks :) to God be the glory.. :)