Under the Heaven Stars

Rays of yellow and orange sunlight
           Your eyes beaming with delight
     Strolling hand by hand along the garden
   Where flowers blooms and sweetness blend

         Tucking an orchid behind my ear
         Drawing me so close and so dear
         I smell your musky natural scent
         Twirling and filling me with sense

       Quietly, we sat and had a small talk
           Unminding even, as night falls
             On the grass, we lie down
    Staring up and pointing to heaven stars 

    Under the shadowy gleam of the moon
     There and there, we shared one kiss
    Next to you in a warmth loving cocoon

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olive_eloi
5:23 pm
03/08/2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Fraser Avatar
December 4, 2014 at 2:27 PM
What a dreamy loving scene you set here Olive with your poetic words. Oh to live such vistas, wow, James :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
December 5, 2014 at 6:19 AM
:)
Goswami Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 4:06 PM
Nice dear...keep it up...best wishes from India...
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 5:30 PM
Thanks :) t God always the glory.. :)
Callus Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 5:17 PM
very romantic...enjoying sunset's beauty and night's allure. // paul
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 5:31 PM
thanks :) to God be the glory.. :)
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