Under the Canopy

Under the canopy of the pine trees we lay -
       from the poem 'Under the canopy of pine trees by Eve Roper

UNDER THE CANOPY

Under the canopy of the pine trees we lay.
Fervent scent gives undertow noses a heady sway.
Four eyes closed, we swallow the coniferous forest.
Love thrives in our paradisiacal protraction of rest.

Blinded to adversity, verdancy thrives in aurora splay
As our minds run into the river of sunlight to play.
We make promises — nothing sovereign outside our love.
He squeezes my hand, our engagement rings think of

Only this moment, the splendor of our crashing lips.
Our bodies envelope each other like an eclipse.
The force of nature — the arcadian elixir, its bliss.
I shall nevermore forget the chill of reminisce.


4/10/2020
Poetic lines from a Poetry Soup Poet - Eve Roper Poetry Contest
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Date: 4/29/2020 10:22:00 AM
What a wordsmith you are Kim, your outstanding vocabulary is on full display, with your use of arcadian elixir bliss, I doubt if that word combination has ever been written!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/29/2020 11:17:00 AM
Thank you so much, John! xx
Date: 4/18/2020 12:40:00 PM
Love this moment! Defined by the arcadian elixer - fantastic.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/18/2020 6:46:00 PM
Thank you, Lonna!
Date: 4/14/2020 7:05:00 AM
This leaves you with a feeling of peace and contentment. Well done. Congrats on a well deserved win. God Bless, JB
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/14/2020 10:12:00 AM
Thank you so much!
Date: 4/13/2020 6:48:00 PM
what a sensual beauty you have penned, congratulations on your well deserved win, hugs and blessings
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/13/2020 7:55:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra!
Date: 4/13/2020 4:25:00 PM
Lovely passionate write Kim--congrats on your well deserved first place.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/13/2020 7:54:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay!
Date: 4/13/2020 2:12:00 PM
- Beautifully written, Kim ... congratulations on your winning poem ... well deserved a 1st place :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/13/2020 7:49:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Date: 4/13/2020 11:14:00 AM
Back with a big congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/13/2020 11:52:00 AM
Hugs to you! Thank you!
Date: 4/13/2020 9:09:00 AM
Great write. Congrats, Kim on your top placement. Blessings.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/13/2020 11:52:00 AM
Thank you, Curtis!
Date: 4/13/2020 8:42:00 AM
Kim congratulations on your win! Love your choice of words, and I always pick up a few good words reading your poetry! Well done once again.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/13/2020 11:51:00 AM
Thank you, Krish! I appreciate it!
Date: 4/13/2020 7:08:00 AM
The second stanza is brilliant, with great choice of vocabulary... The poem exhibits bliss, as shown in the last stanza.. Sounds lovely... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/13/2020 7:51:00 AM
Thank you so much! Hugs :) Kim
Date: 4/12/2020 10:22:00 PM
I love the write, Kim, my favorite line"Our bodies envelope each other like an eclipse. My husband spent a lot of his childhood in the mountains camping and hunting. When I met him I had no knowledge of the experience of camping, but I learned fast. " Good luck in the contest. I hope you had a wonderful Happy Easter to you and your family. Hugs Eve
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/13/2020 7:52:00 AM
I love that you love that line! Makes me smile Eve! Hope you had a nice Easter!
Date: 4/12/2020 9:22:00 AM
This is a winner, Kim! I loved the brilliance of stanza 2, and then read STANZA 3. Wow -- why not add a fourth stanza after the contest just to blow my mind away. Thanks for this diamond. Happy Resurrection Day Blessings. B safe
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/12/2020 5:57:00 PM
Thank you for the grand comment!
Date: 4/12/2020 12:24:00 AM
Quite moving Kim, with the grandeur of Nature Panagiota xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/12/2020 5:58:00 PM
Thank you, sweet lady!
Date: 4/11/2020 11:28:00 PM
A poem of Beauty and Romance! Nice!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/12/2020 5:59:00 PM
Thank you, dear friend!
Date: 4/11/2020 10:34:00 PM
This is simply gorgeous Kim. I hope it receives a top spot on the winning list. I am putting it into my Faves! Have a glorious Easter my friend! xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/12/2020 5:59:00 PM
Happy Easter! Thank you so much!
Date: 4/11/2020 9:44:00 AM
Great composition to promote Eves accomplishments...well done dear poetess...stay safe and Happy Easter coming Kimmy...from the Wingster :o)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/12/2020 6:00:00 PM
Thank you! Hers was a great line! Happy Easter!
Date: 4/11/2020 5:33:00 AM
What an explosion of rapturous poetry. A fav. Blessings. Hugs xxx dearest Kim. Happy Easter.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/12/2020 6:01:00 PM
Thank you and Happy Easter!
Date: 4/11/2020 4:53:00 AM
Eves line inspired you well Kim. Hope alls well, stay safe. Happy Easter. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/12/2020 6:01:00 PM
Happy Easter! Thank you!
Date: 4/11/2020 2:34:00 AM
Superb imagery dear poet Kim. I was speechless! I am craving to read more of your poems.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/12/2020 6:02:00 PM
Thanks so much!
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