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Under the Bridge

what do you do when you've been violated by someone who's not playing with a full deck do you just wait and let both time and water sweep it all under the bridge wouldn't it be wonderful if forgetting was as easy as forgiving posted on October 25, 2018

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Date: 10/27/2018 6:41:00 PM
It all leads to the last lines - biting and real.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/27/2018 6:44:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Brian.
Date: 10/26/2018 8:24:00 AM
Yes, it would be wonderful (if only...). I hate when things like that happen- it's so hard to have "closure" in a situation like that. Brilliant poem, though. ;) Love the image/ idea of time and water sweeping it all under the bridge. Aptly expressed!
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 10/26/2018 5:29:00 PM
Yes! Absolutely... ;)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/26/2018 11:09:00 AM
So true - it is closure we lack in these circumstances. So delightful when we can finally find peace and not let them rob us of that too.
Date: 10/26/2018 2:35:00 AM
Interesting thought Line. Tom.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/26/2018 8:12:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Tom.
Date: 10/26/2018 1:07:00 AM
Powerful heartfelt
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/26/2018 8:12:00 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment,Timothy.
Date: 10/25/2018 7:09:00 PM
sometimes its impossible to forgive or forget line the pain can run too deep:-( hugs jan xx
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/25/2018 8:43:00 PM
So true. Thanks for your visit and comment, Jan.
Date: 10/25/2018 5:07:00 PM
Forgive, but do not forget, because they could do it again..
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/25/2018 5:08:00 PM
Trust me - they won't ever get close enough again. LOL thanks for your lovely visit and comment, SO.

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