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dreamt I kissed your lips altering forever the alignment of the planets AP: 1st place 2022 Posted on September 8, 2020

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/9/2020 7:11:00 PM

I am screaming FAVE, FAVE, FAVE!... I can't remember the title of the movie -- something about L.A., I think -- but Steve Martin was in it, and he paused in the middle of a passionate kiss to philosophize about how such a Kiss was Heaven on Earth (or something like that)... That's where this poem took me, Line!! HOPE IT'S POTD. GREAT! Thanks, Gershon

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/10/2020 6:42:00 PM

Thank you so much. I remember Steve Martin in a Hollywood version of Cyrano de Bergerac called 'Roxane'. He was great in that ~

Ann Gilmour

Date: 9/9/2020 1:46:00 PM

oh sweet words of love, such beautiful sentiments Line ~ love so strong it can move planets... A Fav my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/9/2020 4:33:00 PM

Thanks for the lovely compliment of fav'ing, Ann ~