[ 10 syllable version of my poem A FIRST DATE ]
Luscious night overseen by crescent moon Playful ludic breeze toys with miles of sand A zillion stars out in full bloom this June 'Twas yesteryear nervous you took my hand The charming way you were so chivalrous Stories shared with innocent childlike heart Time vanished most unceremonious Our souls melding as one right from the start Looking at remembrances endearing Years generous to us in every way All hint of skepticism disappearing Never be another come judgment day Two souls inexplicably attracted Entwining hearts forever connected AP: 3rd place 2020
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