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''Under Green Leaves, Dripping'' Hexsonnetta

 
~~ A glass wing butterfly, so very gossamer; A rainforest treasure, she looks up to the sky; And away she will fly, in deep dark rapture. Small frogs of the forest, the bright, colorful hue; Sweet, they play in the dew, on green they like to rest; Oh, they are the sweetest, and there! Hummingbird blue. Small creatures all gripping, under green leaves, dripping. ______________ August 16, 2015 Poetry/HexSonetta /Iambic Trimeter/"Under Freen Leaves, Dripping" Copyright Protected, ID 15-700-403-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, The HexSonnetta, sponsor, Andrea Dietrich Fifth Place
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A. Sharma Avatar
September 21, 2015 at 2:07 AM
Wonderful write broken n yet another superb win! Big congrats!
Roper Avatar
September 19, 2015 at 8:50 PM
Beautiful, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
Arowolo Avatar
September 19, 2015 at 6:33 PM
Good work.Congrats on your superb win this contest.
Tor Avatar
September 19, 2015 at 6:04 PM
Broken Wings congratulations on your win. The images were also nice.
Dietrich Avatar
September 19, 2015 at 4:47 PM
Constance, the meter is a bit off in spots, but your IMAGERY is stunning, and for that, you had to be at least in the top five placements. The ending couplet is fantastic! Love the little pictures you show with this poem. Congrats in my contest.
A  Avatar
September 19, 2015 at 4:22 PM
Broken,, :-) Congratulations on your wonderful win! *SKAT*
Callus Avatar
September 19, 2015 at 3:11 PM
Lovely imagery, Constance! Your rainforest creatures are a sight to watch...gripping under the dripping leaves. ~ Congratulations on a most merited win. hugs // paul
Gibson Avatar
September 19, 2015 at 12:44 PM
Lovely words; so glad you included the images--a perfect pairing. Congratulations!
Allison Avatar
September 19, 2015 at 10:13 AM
such wonderful images and imagery many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Inman Avatar
August 18, 2015 at 2:07 PM
Lovely, BW. You know I love the rainforest.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
August 18, 2015 at 6:03 AM
Broken Wings expressed with lovely soothing imagery! ~Olive Eloisa.. =")
Laurie Avatar
August 17, 2015 at 1:32 AM
Hello Broken Wings... a lovely poem to appreciate the beaut photos - Lindsay
Martin Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 6:45 PM
So pensive for me, constance. Liked this so much. Love your expressions and imagery.
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