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Under All the Layers

"i carry your heart with me(i carry it in my heart) i am never without it(anywhere i go you go . . . " ee Cummings Years gone by refuse to count seems like yesterday trying not to stop and think yet I’ve never forgotten how at your smile I’d melt and wither at your gaze how I treasured every stolen moment and time stood still in your arms somehow I go on never wanting to forget never loved anyone like I loved you under all the layers despite the many years the flame still burns I still love to carry your heart within me AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Submitted on November 9, 2019 for contest CHALLENGE, NOVEMBER – SOME KIND OF LOVE sponsored by DEAR HEART – WIISHKOBI ODE - RANKED 1ST

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Eve Roper

Date: 11/19/2019 9:51:00 PM

Many congratulations on your 1st winning placement:-) hugs eve

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/19/2019 10:05:00 PM

Thank you, Eve. Much appreciated.

Na Na

Date: 11/19/2019 1:43:00 AM

way to go on the win Line

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/19/2019 8:10:00 AM

Thanks, Gregory. Much appreciated.

Brenda Chiri

Date: 11/18/2019 9:13:00 PM

Congratulations line!;)

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/18/2019 9:18:00 PM

Thanks, Brenda.

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/18/2019 7:02:00 PM

Congratulations for your win Line :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/18/2019 8:54:00 PM

Thanks, Heidi. Most appreciated.

Edward Ibeh

Date: 11/18/2019 5:04:00 PM

A wonderful piece, Line:-) Enjoyed! Congratulations on your deserving win.

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/18/2019 5:31:00 PM

Thanks, Edward. Most appreciated.

Constance La France

Date: 11/18/2019 4:20:00 PM

Line, congratulations on your top win in my writing challenge with this emotional and beautifully penned poem, it touched my heart !

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/18/2019 5:32:00 PM

Thank you so much, Constance. Most appreciated. Your contests are always so inspiring.

Jan Allison

Date: 11/18/2019 2:06:00 PM

Such beautiful lines, Many congrats on your win Line:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/18/2019 3:41:00 PM

Thank you so much, Jan. Most appreciated.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/18/2019 1:47:00 PM

- Congratulations on first place in the contest, beautifully written Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/18/2019 3:41:00 PM

Thank you, Sunshine. Most appreciated.

Quoth Theraven

Date: 11/10/2019 6:59:00 PM

Line, 'under all the layers despite the many years the flame still burns' Very nice sentiment in verse. We all carry a torch for someone..,somewhere, sometime. Hope the week-end has been good to you. -Richard

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/10/2019 8:14:00 PM

Thanks, Richard, for your lovely visit and comment.

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/10/2019 3:59:00 PM

Well written. Very special, Line :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/10/2019 8:14:00 PM

Thank you, Heidi. Most appreciated.