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Under a Winding Blacktop

Slow or fast we think behind a slip stream, a contrail of the gone; of what went by a momentary window long ago. Asleep under a blacktop, street-cars roll over my me-mind, the crunch of old bones crackles like thin ice. I am recalling a time now set in resin. Desiccated bugs bite through, gnaw at half-painted pictures. Lost paths for the somnambulant dead. Elephants gather to revisit graveyards. Alive in a memory, but let’s not call this 'living,' double, treble dipping into the time-worn. Such old imagining's will eventually kill every analog clock with their own internal hammers. What am I writing now? Yesterday and tomorrow sway like old measuring scales. Should I think like a Greek, or a Jew, arise and dance shaking my head back and forth as if awakening to every fleeting pause? This is what I am writing upon the underside of a road... an odyssey of sorts one taken by a horde of lemmings. A talking point indicating how I got here recalling this and that, but then again nothing is now real forever.

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Date: 11/16/2022 3:34:00 AM
Eric, I think this is an important poem. So many intriguing ideas, I won't try to enumerate. It goes into Favs! Elizabeth
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Eric Ashford
Date: 11/16/2022 6:07:00 AM
Thank you Elizabeth, not too sound smug but I do agree with your assessment of this. Much obliged for this feedback.
Date: 11/13/2022 12:23:00 PM
Eric, I really like this poem. I'm not sure I understand where you are coming from, and some of the phrases and images are strange to me, but I'm sure they have meaning to you. Keep me wondering!
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Date: 11/14/2022 10:50:00 AM
LOL it is rather enigmatic, but perfect understanding, thankfully. is not a reequipment in reading poetry. Thank you L Milton for this kind response.

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