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and here we are in our castle built from cards one gust of wind and we go down down down grand illusions mere delusions curiosity getting the best of us in spite of red flags waved in the heat of the moment warning signs cast aside caution thrown to the wind AP: Honorable Mention 2023 Submitted on February 3, 2023 for CONTEST NO.1180 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND Posted on January 26, 2023

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Date: 1/28/2023 10:26:00 AM
sometimes the heart wavers at the forefront of passion and desire, it speaks its own language, :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/29/2023 7:30:00 PM
A lovely comment. Thank you Mystic ~
Date: 1/26/2023 1:54:00 PM
I enjoyed your write/picture. Have a blessed day.....................
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Line Gauthier
Date: 1/27/2023 7:49:00 PM
Thanks, Paula ~ much appreciated

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