Under a Miccosukee Sky

Big Cypress stirs, heated by Miccosukee 
sky hung in spun gold. Rising in the east, 
morning sways with waves of river grass
as the elder paddles through waking water
in dugout canoe. Bare-chested, he whistles
an old, creek song, lost and found in tangles 
of green swampland. Bronzed face chiseled from
stone gazes on soft, flush of Indian summer;  
a burning heart beats with nature beneath. 
In hand, he clenches twine of sacred bundle. 
Beads of sweat fall from head lowered in prayer
to the Creator. His silent prayer for earth, hunt, 
harvest and tradition collides with modern tribal
life, a quiet moment complicated by thoughts of 
upcoming ceremonial festivities. If only,
he could step back in time to dance in ancient 
garments 'round sacred fire free from tourists’ pale,
intruding eyes. His daughter and wife will sew
and bead jewelry to sell; his grandsons will wrestle 
alligators; and he, the elder, will stand proud,
fighting to maintain dignity and culture under 
a warm Miccosukee sky, hung by his ancestors
...in spun gold.


By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, 11/17/13
for Shanity Rain's Native American People Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kendrick Avatar
November 29, 2013 at 12:11 PM
Interesting lines penned..Enjoyed reading today..Congrats on your win..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
November 25, 2013 at 11:50 PM
what awesome imagery this displays. I don't know what placement you got. I don't think it matters. But congrats!!
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November 25, 2013 at 9:29 PM
Rhonda, a very lovely win.... . Congratulations on the win... luv~ Linda
Sirak Avatar
November 25, 2013 at 8:08 AM
Absolutely beautiful. Stunning images. Congrats on a well deserved win.
Mehta Avatar
November 24, 2013 at 10:06 PM
Congratulations on this fine win, Rhonda
Adams Avatar
November 24, 2013 at 4:41 PM
beautiful write from you Rhonda...congrats on your win :)
Maverick Avatar
November 24, 2013 at 4:20 PM
Good reading your winner here Rhonda, warm congratulations on the great result..'
Jones Avatar
November 24, 2013 at 3:57 PM
Very beautiful...many congratulations on your win...
Sivey Avatar
November 18, 2013 at 7:05 AM
This is a grandiose write my friend! You have put together a masterful poem here Rhonda, I loved reading this enlightening piece here this morning! What a spectacular poem, Great Work!!
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