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See related image detail. Autumn Landscape. Autumn Trees and Autumn Leaves on the Wet Asphalt ... Collum Lune's word count applied to a Tanka form. 3/5/3/5/5 words instead of syllables.

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under solid gray
skies with misty rain falling....
new golden leaves
rain soak the fresh crop
a harvest is a harvest

autumnbeautytanka

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Yann Rolland

September 30, 2026 at 12:15 AM

beautiful and impressive poem, enjoyed

Sara Kendrick

September 30, 2026 at 5:30 AM

Thank you for your succinct comments, Yann. Your visits always make my day. Sara K. 👍⭐

Evelyn Judy Buehler

September 29, 2026 at 7:10 PM

This is a beautiful poem of vibrant images, and the picture is lovely too, Sara. Very best wishes. 😄

Sara Kendrick

September 30, 2026 at 5:24 AM

Why, thank you, Evelyn. I am delighted you thought it was beautiful with vibrant images. Sara K. 👍⭐

Howard Kerr

September 29, 2026 at 11:56 AM

First and foremost, Sara, my deepest apologies for not being in contact with you earlier on due to technical issues I was having on a smart device which has been dealt with I hope. Weather related descriptions and nature settings I like. Atmospheric too. Excellent writing. Howard

Sara Kendrick

September 29, 2026 at 4:37 PM

I feel for you with technology problems which we all have to deal with from time to time, Howard. I am delighted that you feel this is excellent writing. Sara K. 👍⭐

Paula Goldsmith

September 29, 2026 at 9:43 AM

Love both your wonderful write/pretty fall picture.... Have a fun day writing away...........

Sara Kendrick

September 29, 2026 at 4:23 PM

I am delighted, Paula, that you love them. Thank you for the nice comments. Sara K. 👍⭐

Valsa George

September 29, 2026 at 9:27 AM

So, you have started getting rain. Autumn season is sweet with golden leaves and ripening harvest. A beautiful tanka giving a picture of the changes in your area with the arrival of autumn.

Sara Kendrick

September 29, 2026 at 4:22 PM

Valsa, we have not reached a whole lot of color yet that is in a few weeks, we are extremely dry here but that morning we had clouds, with fog filled with moisture which was nice. I hope we get some needed rain which could come toward this weekend. Your visit is encouraging. Sara K. 👍⭐

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