Undeniable

I hear the siren of death whistling through your hollow heart.

I see the lies fall so fluidly out of your mouth.

Almost as if it’s natural; a black gravity of some sort. 

I smell the genuine scent of decay, so unpleasant, so definite.

You can’t deny.

I touch a dry residue; ashes of your guilt ignited memory.

I taste the sweet flavor of revenge, as you perish away into nothing but eternity.

I feel sympathy for your poor soul, like a child going off to school with nothing more
than their name.

Why is it that as much as I try to hate all I feel is love?

It’s like my emotions are trapped in absolute values.

I’m dying to hate you, yet would so easily die for you.

My contradictions take over; pulling as if I can be separated.

I cringe at your voice.

I smile at your calamity, even though your suffering isn’t my credit to claim.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 11/6/2010 7:11:00 PM
Way to catch all of the contradictions of humanities most intricate emotion. This piece is pure perfection. Amazing piece!!!
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Date: 10/12/2010 9:06:00 PM
undeniably great! "I’m dying to hate you, yet would so easily die for you." I am loving that line. ~Des Juan~
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Date: 10/11/2010 8:33:00 AM
Wow Beautifully written.With so much emotion and passion.Your powerful words have moved me.Best poem I have read today Its going down as one of my favorites.Love,Jamecia
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Date: 10/11/2010 5:26:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Danna. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/9/2010 7:25:00 AM
wow such power in your words my friend thank you [duncan]
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Date: 10/8/2010 9:55:00 PM
Wow such passion....Enjoyed.....Larry
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Date: 10/8/2010 8:42:00 PM
undeniable indeed!, nice write, enjoyed this one...P.D.
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