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Uncorked

He’s crazy as a corkscrew Twisted ... driven to mess with you Uncorked Let the jinn out, and watch the mischievous things he do This raving lunatic loves to mentally moon you He will drop his social pants, drop the civil pretense Impolite are his words and finger gestures, so please make sure you hide the women and children Keep them safely out of his view Because he can get Frankenstein missing-one-neck-bolt on you Uncorked He’s spitting the casket taste with every tobacco chew Slime-ing the furniture everywhere He’s drinking in the madness descending down like Mountain Dew Just beware when he gets that blank, flat soda look in his eye Trust me, you don’t wanna know why When the sharp objects start flying, when you hear a lot of screaming and crying Know for sure that bottle of bizarre has been uncorked And madness now flows in the air unchecked Would you like to meet this man, if you haven’t met him yet? Then take a walk thru the tombs and greet him If so, then you’re crazier than he is, I suspect

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/28/2017 7:06:00 AM
Your poem is filled with great images and has such powerful flow we are in for an incredible ride. A 7 for sure!:) Amitiés
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Date: 5/28/2017 7:00:00 AM
Good Morning Freddie. This was explosive expressive and more. And yes, it left the reader on a note with thought to ponder. Well done in its entirety in composition and construction. We readers have been warned (lol). Have a wonderful day. Uncorked indeed.
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Date: 5/27/2017 8:18:00 PM
oh YES, this is CREEPY GOOD, Freddie. I sure enjoyed THIS one!! a TEN. (that's the new 7 without our rating system here )
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