Uncommon Sight

To see the world, all the good 
as a child at a seasonal faire  
counting months in inches grown
and inherited faint-colored hairs. 
 
All days number 
three hundred and sixty five
so glad they still are.. 
same as the nights,
in eternity of a young life  
under crackling camp fires
and countless unnamed stars. 

We survivors, a wisened few 
or perhaps just lucky, know... 
a year pass's quickly as summer rain 
where dancing steam of scorched pavement
slowly rose.  

Trade all your old moments
by my side if you would, 
we'll take a daring ride
on swift sled
tomorrow's eyes
never could.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Thomas Avatar
January 8, 2023 at 10:59 AM
If only we could but slow it down ...just a bit. Ani is right, this is beautiful Richard. Take care :)
Thomas Avatar
February 3, 2023 at 11:15 AM
Hmm, usually I would prefer vapor as well, but for some reason I think steam fits better here. Maybe because it's a single syllable, I'm not sure.
Theraven Avatar
February 3, 2023 at 7:10 AM
EJ, Thanks for the comment, apparently didn't proof read this poem well. In hindsight, I don't like the use of the word 'steam'. Maybe vapor? -Richard
Jayasankar Avatar
December 28, 2022 at 1:58 AM
Such a beautiful inspiring write Richard... God bless... ~ Ani
Theraven Avatar
February 3, 2023 at 7:08 AM
Thank you Ani, I hope the new year is kind to you and yours. -Richard
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