Uncommon Courtesy

The bookstore door

startles open with

a man's hearty hand

and sincere smile 

landing upon

this skirted lady, 

bashful to be 

coddled, but

undoubtedly 

wanting it.

Mirrored cheeks widen  

like the open door

with hearts extending.

Thanks is verbalized

and humbly

appreciated.

He tilts his top hat

and I am flattered

by the flirt

of uncommon

courtesy.


4-9-2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Canerdy Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 2:17 PM
A charming piece, Juliet. Janice
Mcintosh Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 5:28 AM
Beautiful... such a dreamy artistically woven moment in time, beautiful. God bless you. Love, Gina
Stathakis Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 8:10 PM
A moment in time. Congratulations Juliet!
Seeker Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 9:03 PM
Hahahaha! Let the heart keep dancing, Juliet! Congrats on your win!
Wolf Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 5:10 PM
Wonderful... Though beware the wolf in sheep's clothing... You never know these days who's real or not anymore... I draw the line at touching. A tip of the hat, an opening of the door, a smile and cheerful greeting, even an innocent compliment -- all ok. But even a casual touch,... you never know... Just sayin' ~ gw
Merryman Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 11:52 AM
I like this, Juliet! A charming write! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Dietrich Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 1:40 PM
So cute a description of courtesy. I do not like when women protest this kind of thing (and some weird women do!)
Rodrigues Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 6:15 PM
Beautiful! I was on a celebrity ship where you could sample very expensive wine. You put money in and get a small sample. One man heard me say I would love to try one and he put money in the machine. I never saw his kind face and the wine was delicious!
One Avatar
April 9, 2021 at 1:52 PM
Sounds like a sweet moment .
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